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BLURB:
Returning to Fern Lake after ten years for the funeral of his cousin and teenage enemy, Simon Parker learns his high school sweetheart is nine months pregnant and seven months divorced from his cousin. Their meeting is complicated by her labor and driving her to the hospital. An attempted cheek kiss lands on her mouth and those old feelings resurface. Dana Collins responds to the kiss but Simon walked away ten years before when she refused to go all the way. In those ten years he has never tried to reach her. Her marriage to his cousin lasted less than two years and she knew she’d made a mistake. Can this pair put the past aside and let the embers of an old love be rekindled?
Excerpt:
What had his
cousin done to make his aunt cry? There had been several calls from her over
the years when Randy had been in trouble. “Tell me.”
“He was killed in
an automobile accident last night.”
Simon wished he
was close enough to offer her comfort. She'd always been strong and Randy had
been her most troubled child. “When?”
“Around midnight.”
“Where?”
“He and his fiancé
were on their way from dinner at the Club.”
Simon felt like
he’d been kicked by a mule. A memory of the winding road from the building high
on the hill outside Fern
Lake
“Fiancée? What do
you mean?”
Though he and his
aunt had talked on Christmas Day, his cousin hadn’t been mentioned. Had he
missed something? About three years ago, Randy had married Simon’s high school
sweetheart. “I thought he was married.”
May cleared her
throat. “He and Dana divorced seven months ago.” She sighed. “Their parting
shouldn’t still upset me since he didn’t treat her nicely.”
Simon sucked in a
breath. A dozen memories from the days when he’d lived at the Grantlan mansion
crowded his thoughts. He shoved them away. Anything that happened back then
would stay there. Moving forward was his style.
“Did he abuse
her?” He couldn’t contain the question.
“Not in a physical
way.” She paused. “His drinking and womanizing were painful for her. She
received little support when she tried to get him to seek help. Robert didn’t
approve of the marriage. Neither did Patricia.”
“What do you want
me to do?”
“Come for the
viewing and stay for the funeral. There are things we need to discuss.”
Simon’s gut
clenched. The small scars on his back itched. Randy was dead. Didn’t change any
of Simon’s feelings toward most of the Grantlan family. He cared for Aunt May.
His mother’s sister had welcomed him even though she hadn’t spoken to his
parents since they’d eloped. She’d insisted her husband give him a home.
He drew a deep
breath. What new bomb would blow up his life? He’d resigned from a job he’d
liked because he’d refused to obey Paley’s orders. Years ago he’d taken off
because Dana had denied him what he’d wanted. He’d been an asshole that day. He
groaned. Every time he reached a turning point he walked away. Move forward and
don’t look back, he’d told himself. Would returning to Fern Lake
“Simon, are you
there?”
“Yes.”
“Will you come?”
He swallowed
against the huge lump forming in his throat. He’d lived in the Grantlan mansion
for eight miserable years. No day had passed without being told he wasn’t
worthy of being part of the family. Only the huge fortune his aunt had
inherited from her family had made her suited to become a Grantlan.
“I’m not sure I
can take the time off.” His face burned but he couldn’t tell her he didn’t care
about Randy. In fact he felt glad.
“I’m sure they’ll
give you the days for a family funeral.”
Since there was no
one to grant him leave, she was right. His own reluctance to retrace his tracks
held him back.
“Simon, please.
I’m afraid trouble is brewing.”
“What kind?”
“Patricia is out
of control. She’s making wild accusations and spouting conspiracy theories.
Said Dana sabotaged Randy’s car or Melanie grabbed the wheel. You know how
close she and Randy were.”
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6 comments:
Interesting hook. What trouble is brewing? Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed your blurb and excerpt.
Love the romantic conflict and the hints at more to come in plot complications.
Loved the blurb and excerpt. Want to read more!
I like the honest admission that leaving Dana because she wouldn't give her what he wanted made him a jerk. Perhaps that mature honesty will serve him well in reconnecting with her.
Hmm...I'm curious about his past, especially with Dana. Great excerpt.
Oh wow, these are real problems--and possible murder charges. Very good hook!
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