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BLURB:
Sold by her family to the priestesses of the Temple of Fyre, Ria soon masters using each of the four fyrestones, white, yellow, orange and scarlet. Her curiosity leads her to the archives and there, she learns things that disturb her. There are no men serving as priests but in the past there were. Men are kept in the harras where the priestesses visit. On the day of her testing she is ordered to perform a task she dislikes and refuses to destroy a town. Many of the priestesses fall into unconsciousness. Melera, the chief priestess, beats and banishes Ria for the carrion crows to consume. Ari was abandoned as a child and found by two elderly firestone miners. He has pursued this and is the best of the finders. He goes to the temple to sell the stones he has gleaned. On leaving, Ria attempts to steal the fyrestone he has worn since the day he was found. He thinks she is a boy and a thief and he takes her to his room at the inn. On discovering her identity, he refuses to turn her over to the priestesses and they leave town. They are searching for the fabled blue fyrestones. They also learn to use them they must be bonded physically, emotionally and spiritually. Can they learn to master the blue stones and defeat Malera so they can rule the temple with love and understanding?
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Ria has power but lacks knowledge. When challenged by the head of the all female Temple of Fyre, she loses and goes into exile. As she learns how to hone her strengths, she also learns the history of the Temple. Along the way
she learns about love, but the priestesses have taught her that mating with a male costs a priestess her power. And another confrontation with the head priestess looms.
EXCERPT:
Ria stuffed the scroll she’d taken from the shelves beneath
her caftan and tightened the sash to make sure the cylinder holding the rolled
papyrus remained hidden. Beads of perspiration covered her forehead. She rubbed
the sleeve of her robe over her face. The night air held sultry remnants of the
heat of the day. Usually, the thick walls of the temple complex kept the rooms
and corridors cool. Tonight was different. The usual night breezes were absent,
so the heat remained. Perhaps the approaching solstice was the cause?
Or, maybe her fear of discovery caused her heart to thump
against her chest and her muscles to tighten into confining bands? She was in a
place where she had no right to be without the presence of one of the
priestesses. Acolytes were forbidden full access to the scrolls in the
scriptorium. She drew a deep breath. She’d acted out of necessity. The scroll
beneath her caftan was one she’d discovered during another of her night
searches. She wasn’t permitted to read this one, but she had, and the words
stirred questions her tutors refused to address.
On the morrow, her ability to control the flames of the
fyrestones would be tested. She would be ordered to call flames from a pair of
scarlet crystals and blend her blaze with those raised by the priestesses of
the circle. Then, the chief priestess would assign her a task. Ria believed the
things she’d read in this particular scroll would help her during the ordeal.
The test was not without risk. One slip and the flames she sought to control
could turn her into a living torch.
She crept to the scriptorium door and peered into the hall.
With senses alert, she listened and searched the shadows cast by the flickering
torches on the white plaster of the walls. Sensing no one was nearby she
scurried along the corridor toward the living quarters of the priestesses and
acolytes. With luck, she would reach her room without being discovered.
Her hand pressed against the scroll she wanted to read
again. The words of this particular one were vastly
different from the lessons
she’d been taught by the priestesses. Had they lied? Were the ways to use the
fyrestones described in these writings true, or were they only a fable invented
by some ancient scribe?
There were other scrolls which told tales that seemed
unreal. The aged priestess in charge of the scriptorium had laughed when Ria
asked about dragons with eyes the color of the scarlet fyrestones. The old
woman scoffed when Ria showed her passages describing wands wielded by wizards
that sent lashes of bright or dark flames to control people.
There was no one she could ask if this scroll contained
truths. Questions weren’t encouraged. Still, she wanted
to believe what she’d
read in this scroll about the uses of the stones. They told of helping the
people, and that appealed to her.
Ria sighed. Since the day she’d been bought from the slavers
by the chief priestess, her life, though interesting
had been lonely. Not for
her the crowded classrooms, or the dormitory where she could form friendships
with the
other acolytes. She had her own chamber and a private bathing room.
During her lessons, she’d been the only student. Even her meals had been taken
with the priestesses, not the other acolytes.
Why had she been kept isolated from the other acolytes? What
make her so different? Like Ria, most of the
others had been brought to Rosti
by the slavers. At twenty, she was a year or two younger than most of the young
women who had entered the temple with her.
She’d learned to call fire from every color of the crystals
and learned how to blend the flames to form sheets of
fire. She could impose
maps and pictures on the sheets and knew the ways of sending spears of flame to
various places. From the tiny flames of the white, to yellow, orange, and
scarlet fyrestones, her progress had been steady.
A peal of laughter made her stiffen. She ducked into a
shadowed alcove. After the evening meal, acolytes were
to be in their rooms,
not wandering in the halls. A pair of senior priestesses, their orange robes
gleaming in the light from the hall torches, appeared. The women hurried past
Ria’s hiding place and entered the harras.
Ria trailed behind them. The noises from the studs’ quarters
stirred her curiosity. The men seldom left the harras, except for exercise in
the garden, or when they were summoned to the room of one of the priestesses.
Until Ria passed her final test, she wasn’t allowed into the rooms where the
men were kept. Several times, she had spied on the studs, but only during the
day, and never in the evening when the priestesses visited. She paused beside
the beaded curtain and peered inside.
Her eyes widened. Most of the men were nude or scantily
clad. Priestesses reclined on low couches. Studs
offered beverages and finger
foods. Ria watched as one of the men fondled a priestess’ breasts. Another man
swayed to the sound of a flute. He held his organ in his hand. Ria felt a
stirring low in her belly. Her breath caught in her throat.
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7 comments:
A new lesson is about to take place. ;-)
Sounds like the blind leading the blind. Lessons will be painful.
It will be interesting to see how Ria masters all the knowledge at her fingertips! :-)
Sounds like Ria has a lot of knowledge at her finger tips and a new lesson to begin. Could be rough. In enjoyed your post. Thanks for sharing!
My goodness, it sounds lile there are a lot of unholy things going on in the temple! It definitely needs new management.
Linda McLaughlin
Not much of a dress code in this temple.
Also, I figured out how to read all your text, even the last few words that get cut off. Copy all the text and paste it into Word. Voila!
I did the same thing as Ed with copy/pasting. Not sure what the issue is on the post to cause it, but the text is not wrapping properly.
worth the work to read.
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