Showing posts with label Ending. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Ending. Show all posts

Tuesday, March 12, 2024

The Ending of the Love Plot featured at Tuesday's Writer's Tip #BWLAuthor #MFRWAuthor #writing #Plot #Love

 Thenending of the Love plot can be tricky. Think of some of the great love stories that don't have hppy endings. Anna Karenina is one and very much one I remember reading at a young age. I also talked about the ending and thought it wads dumb. My third grade teacher was upset that I read such a book. MY father said Not in his house. I could read anybook on the shelves. I thought the ending was dumb. I was and still am looking for thehappy ending where love rules and wins over all obstacles. Perhaps why I will never write the Great American Novel. So remember while using the love plot though a happy ending is great so can an unhappyone.

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Tuesday, June 6, 2023

The Ending of the Rescue Plot #BWLAutho #MFRWAuthor #writing #tips #ending #Rescue Plot

 As this plot ends, the good guy and the bad guy have a confrontation. Usually, the good guy wis. There are other possibilities but they must be planned for during the book so the reader can accept the, The victim might not want to be rescued. Careful planning can make this word. The bad guy could win the confrontation. If you choose any other than the good guy being victorious, the seeds must be laid early. Readers don't like being fooled.

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Tuesday, May 9, 2023

Tuesday's Writer's Tip - The Pursuit Plot - The Ending #BWLAuthor #MFRWAuthor #Plot #writing #tip #Pursuit #Ending

 The ending of the Pursuit Plot can be in two directions, One with the pursued caught and imprisoned in some way. Or with the pursuee escaping and beyond capture. The chase is resolved. Now the prison can be temporary if the characters might enjoy a sequel.

When writing the Pursuit Plot remember to keep the reader off guard. Make the near misses exciting. Even use reversal of who is being chased with skill. Keep things unpredictable. If you use something the reader might expect, find a way to twist it sideways. Remember the chase should never be trite or predictable.

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Tuesday, March 7, 2023

The Ending of the Quest Plot is featured as Tuesday's Writer's Tip #BWLAuthor #MFRWAuthor #Plot #Quest #Ending

 Once you've navagated the middle of the Quest story, you have reached the end. Things to remember is the main character has to change. Another is that he or she may gain what they sought, they may find a different object or they can fail. This is known as the resolution and brings the quest to an end.

Often the characters in this story are young who must leave their home. During the journey, they must mature and are becoming adults. Perhaps not in years but in emotional development. Now you have the climax scene. Here, the main character either accepts or rejects what they have learned or gained during their adventure.

Things to remember while writing a quest story.

This is a search for a person, place or thing.

This is a journey perhaps visiting many places along the way.

Consider ending where the character began. Not always possible.

The main character must change emotioanlly and in character.

There is usually at least one traveling companion and also a helpful person who may be considerably older.

Tuesday, April 26, 2022

Tuesday's Writer's Tip Knowing When To Stop #BWLAuthor #MFRWAuthor #writing #the End # when to Stop

You've finished writing the story and all the problems are solved. But now you must let those characters go and you don't want to. They have become friends, closer to you than anyone, Unfortunately, the story has ended. You write The End. Then something else occurs and you dither. We've all read books that end and end and end. At one time this was the norm in telling a story. Writing the end meant the writer could dither and tell the reader all those things that happened in their characters' futures. Don't fall into the trap. When the story ends, stop.

Another way to end is to make hints about a coming sequel. There may be wore stories in this world. I remember reading the second book in a series that began with a recap of the first book and was essentially the ending of the last book. Some worlds need more than one story but the author is wise if there are other stories in this world to make them self contained and perhaps reference what happened to the characters of another book in this world. Make the ending clean. Then start another story in that world fresh.


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Thursday, April 23, 2020

Thursday's Fifth Scene Sanctuary's Ending #MFRWAuthor #BWLAuthor #Fantasy #Romance


David watched Chief Elder Jeremiah and Simon walk from the meeting house. The pale blond hair of the older man had been clipped short. Simon’s brushed his shoulders. The brighter color of his didn’t detract from their similarity. Their body shape and their walk seemed identical. The older man draped an arm around the younger man’s shoulders.
How did Paul feel about the rejection? His expression hadn’t changed. Did the inclusion of his older brother in the group leaving Sanctuary trouble him?
David didn’t like the idea of Simon being part of the exploratory group. Though subtle in his words, Simon was a trouble-maker. Just thinking about traveling for weeks and months in his company caused David to swallow against acid rising in his throat.
Tension peaked. David left the stage. To give himself a feeling of peace he paused near the colored glass windows. With a finger he traced the green circle representing Erda, the rayed scarlet orb of Sola and the yellow crescent of Luna. Would the Three protect them on the journey? Did the worship of the goddesses remain anywhere but in Sanctuary?
Elder John and the other elders marched down the steps. Paul started to follow but was waved back. He joined David and the three others followed. As a unit they stepped outside into the deserted moonlit courtyard.
“We need to implement our plan.” Paul led them to the benches beneath the barren sugar maples. “We’re free to go.”
David crouched in front of the bench where Paul, Ruth and Deborah sat. Gabriel leaned against a tree. “What plans have you made?”
Paul shrugged. “We pack and leave.”
“Do you have any of the old maps?”
“Why?” Gabriel asked. “Surely the land has changed.”
“What about supplies? How much can we take?”
Paul laughed. “I’m glad you’re with us. The goddesses knew you were needed for practical matters.”
“I’ve been gathering and packing medicines,” Deborah said. “I have an entire kit a Healer needs including instruments and material for casts.”
“I have copies of every song of praise for each ot the four celebrations and a collection of every instrument I can play.”
Ruth grinned. “There’s nothing special I need.”
Paul shrugged. “I have a few books but that’s all. I suppose we’ll need food and maybe a cow, chickens and a goat.”
David sucked in a breath. He didn’t believe their lack of knowledge. Were they that naïve? How could he tell them they were fools? “Just how do you plan to transport all you think we should have? We’re an exploratory party not settlers.”
Paul shook his head. “I figured we’d each have a riding and a pack horse. They owe us that much.”
David leaned forward. “Maybe they do but have you seen the land beyond the Gap?”
His four companions shook their heads. “Have you?” Gabriel asked.
“I have.”
“Why?”
“I figured a way to banish me would be found. There are boulders as big as a cow blocking the way. The trail through is narrow. To move horses through the passage, we would have to move those rocks. The Elders wouldn’t permit the barrier to be open. Though you want to have wagons, the slopes are steep and rocky. We can take what we can carry on our backs.”
“Maybe there’s another way out,” Deborah said.
“Would they tell us?” David asked.
Paul rose. “David, take care of the supplies. Thinking about what to take and what to leave makes my head ache.”
“Is that the only reason…” David began. He stopped when Paul slapped his shoulder.
“You know I’m not practical. You always were.” He waved to the others. “We’d better go to the kitchen before all the food is gone.”
David remained beside the bench. He felt more alone than ever. He watched them walk away. He had no family to sit with. His mother was banished and forbidden to  enter the village. Deborah would sit with the Healers. He rose and walked toward the community kitchen. The long building was mostly wood except for the stone cooking area.
He entered the dining area. Narrow tables along the wall held a variety of food. David joined the line and took a platter. A slab of bread with the center cut into a bowl he filled with a savory stew. He selected cheeses, slices of ham, chicken and several sweets. With a mug of tea he carried his meal to a table in the corner with a single chair. He ignored the waves of his fellow herdsmen. He needed to be alone to think of the change to come and to plan for the trip.
Questions abounded. Why had Paul waited to reveal his plan? Why had the elders agreed? If David had known about this, he could have found the things they needed weeks or months ago.
For so long he’d been isolated from his childhood companions. How well did he know them now? Paul was a dreamer who had infected his friends with a vision of what he believed should happen in Sanctuary. David wondered if he’d been spared the infection and how long his immunity would last. Someone had to think of the practical aspects of the venture. If he hadn’t decided to join them he feared they wouldn’t have survived the journey through the Gap.
His emotions bounced like a fabled rubber ball from hope to despair and back. Though he welcomed the chance to leave Sanctuary, the presence of Ruth and Deborah in the group brought risks. All of his friends had spent the past five years in studies, not learning how to live where there was no support from those who shared their talents. Could he keep them safe?
David’s thoughts raced. He tried to list all they needed to carry. How much weight could each person carry? He needed Ranger packs with their metal frames that had many uses. Lined and oiled ponchos could double as blankets. Food, clothes, weapons.
How could he remember everything? What if he forgot something vital to their survival? He needed a slate. The moment he finished the sweets he carried his platter and mug to where people washed the dishes.
Then he sought the head stockman. “I won’t be working with the flocks.”
The older man nodded. “May the Three protect you. You have been an excellent shepherd.”
“Thank you for the blessing.”
“Keep your eyes open for pastures and grassy hillsides. We need room for our expanding stock.”

Sunday, April 19, 2020

Sunday's Book Sanctuary's Ending #MFRWAuthor #BWLAuthor #Fantasy #Romance

Sanctuary's Ending (The Goddesses of Solunda Book 1)

In the beginning the goddesses Sola and Luna shone on their sister bringing forth all life. Erda grew rich and fat and the people loved the Three. Some began to lust for the treasures buried beneath Erda’s skin. She offered them freely but men began to dig and plunder her riches. Sola and Luna hated what they saw. With floods, winds, fires and earthquakes they punished the children Erda had raised.

For five hundred years has passed since a group of the goddesses followers retreated behind the Gap. Almost twenty years ago, five children were born. They were tested for gifts of the goddess and to enter training. One became a Healer, one a Singer, one a Sensitive and one an Elder. David’s test was conducted by a Teacher who hated him and he was assigned to the lowest class and became a shepherd. Though he accepts this, he is angry especially when some of the talents begin to emerge. He has healed animals and can sense the emotions of others. The five had always talked about leaving the sanctuary.

On the evening of the spring equinox, the four are to be inducted into their specialties. The Elder trainee among them has plans to leave. He invites David to join them. David’s enemy offers to accompany them and is given permission. What will they find when they enter the world? A Seer gives a forewarning. Of the six only four will return. Who will be left behind and why? Can David prove he has at least a touch of all of the talents?


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Thursday, July 11, 2019

Thursday's Fourth Scene from Sanctuary's Ending #MFRWAuthor #BWL Publishing #Fantasy


As David rushed down the dirt street toward the meeting house he heard the first peal of the summoning bell. His brown poncho flowed behind him like the sails of a ship he’d seen in one of the old books. The wooden chain with the symbols of the goddesses and his stature banged against his chest.
His morning had been filled with frustration as he’d herded the sheep and goats into the pen. The second peal rang. He dashed through the doors of the brown stone building as the third note sounded. The doors banged shut behind him. Relief made his knees weak.
With difficulty he calmed his breathing and slid onto the rear bench on the men’s side of the room. As the Singers began the farewell to Sola and the welcome to Luna he kept his head bent.
The moment the song ended Chief Elder Jeremiah rose and spoke. “Today begins a new year. Give thanks to Erda, one of the goddesses of Solunda.”
David knew his last moment arrival had been noticed by the assembled elders. At the edge of his vision he saw Simon’s snide smile. Anger bubbled and David fought to keep the simmer contained. His lateness meant some form of punishment, a public scolding or a night in the stocks. Better punishment than banishment and stoning. Only an injury or illness allowed anyone to miss attending any of the four celebrations.
He shifted restlessly on the backless stone bench. The meeting house was the only building in the village with a stone floor. Windows of colored glass, three on each side featured the goddesses in their glory. Sola wore a scarlet gown, Luna had a pale yellow and Erda’s gown was green. Rainbows of color from the setting sun infused the room.
The Singers rose. The women’s voices praised Luna. The men sang of Sola. David heard Gabriel’s rich tenor soar in praise of Erda. “Be fruitful. Bring life to all who inhabit your land.” The voices muted and stilled.
“Rise,” Elder Jeremiah shouted. “For the first time in this new year Sola and Luna bring equal light to Erda. Repeat the story our ancestors told when they left the outside world and came to Sanctuary.”
“Erda wept. The soil was poisoned. Water was polluted. People died.”
David joined his voice to those of the people around him. He repeated the words he’d recited since he was a child.
“Erda cried to her sisters but Sola and Luna could not help.
A few people heard her cries and spoke to all. Few listened.
The wise ones left the lowlands and came here to await a call to return.”
David sucked in a breath. Had Paul really heard the summons? Dread rose and echoed through him.
“Storms appeared. Erda shook. Swirling winds blew. Sleet, hail and ice fell battering the land. Great waves of water rolled over the land.
Fire storms flared in forests and towns.
So we here wait for a call to return.”
Singers’ voices rose in a dirge to the lost days. Notes reverberated from the stone walls of the meeting house.
David studied the faces of the people who had once been his friends. His twin sat with the other healers. Light from the Sola window burnished her hair to a rich red.
How different their lives had been. She belonged to Sanctuary’s elite. Feelings of uselessness filled his spirit. He was of the lowest caste. But he could heal. He thought of the times he had cured sheep, cattle, goats and horses. He had healed dogs after fights with wild animals. His hands clenched. He fought the urge to run from the meeting house where he truly didn’t belong.
The song moved from sadness to notes of the song for the awakening of Erda. He searched for Gabriel who had become a Singer though none of his family had ever shown the talent.
An eerie feeling slithered along David’s skin. Why did he sense the emotions of other and sometimes their thoughts? He had no training other than what he’d discovered on his own. Knives of hatred filled the air. He stared at Simon who acted as doorkeeper. Their gazes met for an instant. David knew who sent the dark emotions.
Holding a groan inside David broke eye-contact. His attention returned to the women’s side. Ruth looked as though she wanted to be ill. As a Sensitive he felt sure she sensed Simon’s emotions. Petite with hair so dark it appeared black, she looked younger than her age. Did she agree with Paul’s plan or had the power of his emotions swayed her? What caused that pinched expression? Were the multitude of emotions in the meeting house responsible? He scanned the other Sensitives. All seemed tense.
Think sheep. The moment he imagined being with the flocks his thoughts cleared.
Elder Jeremiah sat at the end of the row of elders. Did the arrogant man know what his younger son planned? Jeremiah followed the rules of Sanctuary to the letter. Only those who stood against his wishes were ever named sinners.
As the Singers continued the welcome to Luna and the new year, David’s thoughts focused on his past. When he and Deborah turned ten they’d left their mother’s cottage. They’d been scared and curious. For five years they’d learned the Reading, writing and arithmatics. At fifteen they’d been tested to see if they would enter one of the specialties. Of the five children of his birth year only he hadn’t been chosen to study for one of the five Elder, Teacher, Healer, Sensitive or Singer.
Since he was a male the Elders said he couldn’t become a Healer or a Sensitive. His singing voice hadn’t been judged strong enough to train. He had wanted to be Teacher. Several times among the younger students he’d predicted the ones who were later chosen to train for one of the talents.
A touch of anger rose and he thought of Simon’s smug smile during the testing. He had lied. So for five years David had worked as a herdsman.
David’s head jerked. He’d been so deep in memories he’d nearly dozed. If anyone noticed he would have faced a second punishment.
The final notes of the song faded. Chief Elder Jeremiah rose. “Will Ruth, Deborah, Gabriel and Paul present themselves? They are to be invested as servants of the goddesses.”
David watched his friends leave their places. The young women joined the young men on the platform. Elder Jeremiah gave them the symbols of their specialties. Hands for Deborah, a heart for Ruth, a harp for Gabriel and the three circles, red, yellow and green for Paul.
Resentment roiled in David’s gut. Why hadn’t he staged an accident? A broken leg would have kept him from witnessing the end of his dreams. His hands clenched.
Paul stepped forward. His braced shoulders and his steady gaze evoked confidence. David’s hands clenched. Did Paul realize the chaos his words could bring?’
“On this day when we face the start of a new year I hear Erda crying. Carry your knowledge, talents and the glory of the Three to all of Erda’s people.”
David straightened. Gasps rippled through the audience becoming a roar like winds howling from the mountain peaks. Paul’s expression made David think of a zealot.
“The time has come to disperse. The time has come to spread the words of Sola, Luna and Erda. The time has come to step beyond the barrier of the Gap.”
Jeremiah leaped to his feet. He raised a fist and stalked toward his son. “We were called from the world to keep the talents and the glory of the Three pure. There has been no message. Who but the Chief Priest would hear the words of the goddesses?”
Paul faced his father. “The time for a change has come. The day has arrived and we must leave Sanctuary and go into the world. I have heard the goddesses and I will follow their directions. Have you listened? Have you ignored the signs? The increased births, the failing of the fields. These are warnings from Erda, Sola and Luna. Are you so mired in your comfort and power you refuse to hear?”
David stared at his other friends. Ruth buried her face in her hands. The storm of emotions roaring through the room even reached him. How must she feel?
“Who will come with me?” Paul shouted. “Does anyone hear the cries?” Moonlight shone through the clear window above the platform and formed a halo around him.
Ruth, Deborah and Gabriel stepped to Paul’s side. David rose. He couldn’t allow his friends to stand alone. If a stoning was declared he would accept the punishment. As he climbed the three steps to the stage he felt like a fish being drawn from the water.
Ruth turned toward him. Fear filled her dark eyes. He touched her shoulder. Peace. To his astonishment he saw hope banish darker emotions.
“Traitor,” Jeremiah shouted. “The goddess will punish your blasphemy.” He glared at his younger son. “Who drove you to take this step?”
“We were called. I heard.”
The older man whirled and jabbed a finger into David’s chest. Icy blue eyes strafed David’s face. “Son of sin, the seeds of your destruction were sown by your father. You were made a herder of animals to break the ties you bound around my son’s soul.”
Anger boiled to the surface. David fought for control. Fury blocked his vocal cords. A scream formed and pulsed to be free.
Paul raised his fist. “The call came to me. David knew nothing until three days ago. For five years I’ve studied the histories and the sayings of the goddesses. I’ve meditated. Erda, Sola and Luna spoke to me. I am now an Elder. Judgment must come from my peers.”
Jeremiah turned to the seated members of the community. “My people, go and enjoy the waiting dinner. The Elders will decide the punishment.”
David drew Ruth, Gabriel and Deborah toward the rear of the platform. The Singers brushed past them. Men, women and children rushed to the open doors.
Simon lounged against the rear wall. With crossed arms and a satisfied smirk he looked as though the verdict would be his to give.
The Elders congregated on the other side of the stage. Paul was led to the Seat of Judgment.
Ruth’s pain-filled eyes and her tight mouth caught David’s attention. He closed his eyes and sent thoughts of peace and calmness. Be at ease. When her eyes flew open her tension had abated. What had he done? This was no time to consider.
Elder Jeremiah approached Paul. “You are my son. How could you betray me?”
“How could you not listen and observe?”
“I name you a liar and blasphemer. The goddesses would never speak to one newly invested. You are no leader. You will lead the people of Sanctuary to their doom. Why should we return to suffer what our forefathers gathered here to escape?”
“They came to preserve the worship of the goddesses,” Paul said. “They should have left years ago.”
“You are a fool.”
Elder John strode toward the chair. “Jeremiah, consider the signs. The increase in population. The failure of the fields. Once before these signs rose. Your ancestor, also Chief Elder, handed down new rules forbidding certain women to wed. I suggest we send these young people to explore and find places where we can expand.”
David noted the expressions on the faces of the nine Elders morph from anger to agreement.
“How do we vote,” Elder John said. “Those in favor of sending a small group raise your hands.”
The only one not responding was Jeremiah.
“Send us,” Paul said. “We are prepared and have dreamed since childhood for this chance.”
Simon marched down the aisle. “Though I would rather stay I will go with them. They have no Teacher. My presence will keep Sanctuary safe.”
His smile raised David’s suspicion. Ruth’s body shook. David touched her hand. Be careful.
Jeremiah grasped his older son’s hand. “Your sacrifice will be rewarded when you return. You’ve always heeded my words.” He embraced Simon. “Go with these fools. Return to bring me the news of their failure.”


Sunday, July 7, 2019

Sunday's Book Sanctuary's Ending #MFRWAuthor #BWL Publishing #fantasy

Sanctuary's Ending (The Goddesses of Solunda Book 1)

In the beginning the goddesses Sola and Luna shone on their sister bringing forth all life. Erda grew rich and fat and the people loved the Three. Some began to lust for the treasures buried beneath Erda’s skin. She offered them freely but men began to dig and plunder her riches. Sola and Luna hated what they saw. With floods, winds, fires and earthquakes they punished the children Erda had raised.

For five hundred years has passed since a group of the goddesses followers retreated behind the Gap. Almost twenty years ago, five children were born. They were tested for gifts of the goddess and to enter training. One became a Healer, one a Singer, one a Sensitive and one an Elder. David’s test was conducted by a Teacher who hated him and he was assigned to the lowest class and became a shepherd. Though he accepts this, he is angry especially when some of the talents begin to emerge. He has healed animals and can sense the emotions of others. The five had always talked about leaving the sanctuary.

On the evening of the spring equinox, the four are to be inducted into their specialties. The Elder trainee among them has plans to leave. He invites David to join them. David’s enemy offers to accompany them and is given permission. What will they find when they enter the world? A Seer gives a forewarning. Of the six only four will return. Who will be left behind and why? Can David prove he has at least a touch of all of the talents?

Wednesday, July 3, 2019

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Sanctuary's Ending (The Goddesses of Solunda Book 1)

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In the beginning the goddesses Sola and Luna shone on their sister bringing forth all life. Erda grew rich and fat and the people loved the Three. Some began to lust for the treasures buried beneath Erda’s skin. She offered them freely but men began to dig and plunder her riches. Sola and Luna hated what they saw. With floods, winds, fires and earthquakes they punished the children Erda had raised.

For five hundred years has passed since a group of the goddesses followers retreated behind the Gap. Almost twenty years ago, five children were born. They were tested for gifts of the goddess and to enter training. One became a Healer, one a Singer, one a Sensitive and one an Elder. David’s test was conducted by a Teacher who hated him and he was assigned to the lowest class and became a shepherd. Though he accepts this, he is angry especially when some of the talents begin to emerge. He has healed animals and can sense the emotions of others. The five had always talked about leaving the sanctuary.

On the evening of the spring equinox, the four are to be inducted into their specialties. The Elder trainee among them has plans to leave. He invites David to join them. David’s enemy offers to accompany them and is given permission. What will they find when they enter the world? A Seer gives a forewarning. Of the six only four will return. Who will be left behind and why? Can David prove he has at least a touch of all of the talents?




EXCERPT:



Rebellion

Five hundred years ago, chaos reigned in the land. From the followers of the goddesses, Sola, Luna and Erda, a group of believers were called. They retreated to a hidden valley in the mountains. The goddesses ordered them to form a community and wait for a call to return to the outer world. A narrow pass over the mountain called the Gap guarded the place they people called Sanctuary.
During their isolation talents arose. Some became Healers and were able to treat and diagnose illness by touch. Sensitives who could read the emotions of others and on occasion read or send thoughts were born. Singers of great power who with their voices could guide and direct others arose. Elders appeared and they could lead and use the voice of command. Teachers who held traces of all the talents and who could tell if a child bore a talent. Of those with the talents there were no more than ten to twenty who bore each gift. Once there had been talented called Seers but there had been no one with a touch of more than one talent for more than twenty years.
The remaining people were commoners. They were divided into four groups. Caretakers cared for the running of the town and those with gifts. Rangers guarded the boundaries of the valley and the slopes. The farmers cared for the land. The herders tended the animals. Many of the commoners prayed one of their children would show a talent.
As the years passed hierarchies developed. The Elders became the rulers. Of the ones gifted as Teachers, there were seldom more than one and during some generations none.
Twice the call to return to the world was heard. Each time the Elders found a way to prevent the dispersal and to keep the number of the community to less than fifteen hundred commoners.




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Wednesday, April 4, 2018

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Sanctuary's Ending (The Goddesses of Solunda Book 1)

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In the beginning the goddesses Sola and Luna shone on their sister bringing forth all life. Erda grew rich and fat and the people loved the Three. Some began to lust for the treasures buried beneath Erda’s skin. She offered them freely but men began to dig and plunder her riches. Sola and Luna hated what they saw. With floods, winds, fires and earthquakes they punished the children Erda had raised.

For five hundred years has passed since a group of the goddesses followers retreated behind the Gap. Almost twenty years ago, five children were born. They were tested for gifts of the goddess and to enter training. One became a Healer, one a Singer, one a Sensitive and one an Elder. David’s test was conducted by a Teacher who hated him and he was assigned to the lowest class and became a shepherd. Though he accepts this, he is angry especially when some of the talents begin to emerge. He has healed animals and can sense the emotions of others. The five had always talked about leaving the sanctuary.

On the evening of the spring equinox, the four are to be inducted into their specialties. The Elder trainee among them has plans to leave. He invites David to join them. David’s enemy offers to accompany them and is given permission. What will they find when they enter the world? A Seer gives a forewarning. Of the six only four will return. Who will be left behind and why? Can David prove he has at least a touch of all of the talents?

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Rebellion
Five hundred years ago, chaos reigned in the land. From the followers of the goddesses, Sola, Luna and Erda, a group of believers were called. They retreated to a hidden valley in the mountains. The goddesses ordered them to form a community and wait for a call to return to the outer world. A narrow pass over the mountain called the Gap guarded the place they people called Sanctuary.

During their isolation talents arose. Some became Healers and were able to treat and diagnose illness by touch. Sensitives who could read the emotions of others and on occasion read or send thoughts were born. Singers of great power who with their voices could guide and direct others arose. Elders appeared and they could lead and use the voice of command. Teachers who held traces of all the talents and who could tell if a child bore a talent. Of those with the talents there were no more than ten to twenty who bore each gift. Once there had been talented called Seers but there had been no one with a touch of more than one talent for more than twenty years.

The remaining people were commoners. They were divided into four groups. Caretakers cared for the running of the town and those with gifts. Rangers guarded the boundaries of the valley and the slopes. The farmers cared for the land. The herders tended the animals. Many of the commoners prayed one of their children would show a talent.

As the years passed hierarchies developed. The Elders became the rulers. Of the ones gifted as Teachers, there were seldom more than one and during some generations none.
Twice the call to return to the world was heard. Each time the Elders found a way to prevent the dispersal and to keep the number of the community to less than fifteen hundred commoners.
David stood beside the glistening white eye stone near the peak of the winter pasture. The rays of the setting sun focused near the hole in the giant wheel. The spring equinox signaling the beginning of a new year would occur soon. On that day the light of the morning sun would pierce the opening and illuminate the polished circle of black stone. At night, the moon’s rays would do the same.

The people of the hidden community of Sanctuary would gather to celebrate the day the goddesses Sola and Luna cast their light for equal times on their sister goddess Erda. This event signaled the arrival of a new year.
As David watched the other shepherds stride up the slopes a mantle of sadness settled on his shoulders. The men were eager to join their families in the village to prepare for the ceremony celebrating the start of a new year.
No one waited for him. His mother had been banished to a small cottage in the forest. His sister belonged to the Healers. His father had to be dead. Before David’s and his sister’s birth, their sire had been led to the Gap and stoned. After being tested for a talent David had been named a commoner.

The day passed in quiet. The herds grazed and none of the animals caused him or the dogs a problem. The sun neared setting.

He whirled and studied the slopes. The talent he shouldn’t have warned him someone approached. David. His name flowed down the slope and echoed in his head.

Had he heard the call or had his imagination supplied the voice. For several days he’d been edgy. He opened his senses and sensed approaching emotions. Was it Paul? Once they’d been almost inseparable. Was his old friend on the way? Paul had no reason to seek him. He belonged to the elite of Sanctuary. Paul had been favored by the Three and had been selected to train as an elder.

“Hello.” Paul called.

David ran up the path to meet his friend. Paul’s grin brought memories of their childhood. Though slight in build Paul possessed a wiry strength. His stature often made people think of him as frail. David knew better. Paul had been first in sprint races and best at climbing trees. He’d always made David feel like a giant.

Paul halted and ran his hands through his pale blond hair. “Are you hiding out here?” His blue eyes searched David’s face.

David shook his head. “I’m here to lead the flock to the village. Why did you come? Aren’t you being invested at the spring equinox celebration?”

“I am.”

“Are you running away?” No candidate was allowed to leave the village alone.

“Elder John is on my heels. Why weren’t you with the other shepherds?”

“Someone has to guard the flock.” David clasped his friend’s hand. “I have no problem being the drover. There’s no one waiting for me.”

“Enough said. You’ll soon wish you’d let someone else do the chore. Elder John complained the whole way.”

David arched an eyebrow. “Why him?”

“He knew I wanted to see you and he suspects…Tell you later.” Paul’s lips tightened.

David knew Paul wouldn’t speak until he was ready. He wondered what Paul planned. He’d been isolated from his friend and could no longer read Paul’s emotions or hear his thoughts.

“We’ll talk later.” Paul grasped David’s arm and pulled him toward the stone hut. “Elder John and I will spend the night and leave at sunrise. I’ll be back in time to prepare for being invested.”

David stared at the ground. Jealousy pierced his thoughts. He should have stood on the stage of the meeting house too.

His hands fisted and he forced his throat to open. “I’m happy for you.” And he was but the news dropped more acid to erode his self-confidence.

Elder John stepped into view. Heaving gasps rocked his rotund body. He slumped on the stone bench outside the hut. “Have you a place for a weary old man to rest. Preferably prone.”


David clasped the older man’s hand. The elder had always treated him with kindness. 

Wednesday, September 21, 2016

Wednesday's Writer's Tip - Writing ABC - Ending - Decision Time #MFRWauthor #writing


The Black Moment has passed and the hero or heroine believes all is lost. Now comes the decision time. Do they accept or do they fight for what they want?

If they accept all is lost, the story could have a flat ending. The reader might finish the book but they might not buy another by this writer. Why? Readers like to see the hero or heroine fight to the end. I'm reading a science fiction novel by one of my favorite writers - Andre Norton. The hero has reached the place where he was to be met by his friends. The enemy is close behind. His friends have left. The enemies threaten. Does the hero give up. I know I would have been disappointed if he had.

So the hero or heroine decides to make a stand and to fight. This can bring the reader to the edge of their seat. In the story I was reading to end the mental summons of the enemy, the hers discovers pain will keep them enemy at boy. He subjects himself to pain. In so he brings the enemy to him and using fire as a weapon to drive the enemies away and also to break their mental hold on him.

So if given the choice of accepting or fighting let your characters fight for what they want. Even if they are the enemy and this will bring an excitement to the end of the book.

Wednesday, September 14, 2016

Wednesday's Writer's Tip - Writing ABC - The Ending


You've explored the middle of the story and have all those scenes full of action that drive the characters and the story. The tale is almost ended but you can't just write The End. The ending a a story is more complicated than that. So let's start to look at the plots.

There is the Black Moment or the time when one of the characters believes he or she has no chance to reach the goal. This period needs to be strong and the character must believe and make the reader believe. Achieving this might be hard but it's a necessary part of the story. Pulling out all the stops here is a must.

One thing you must remember is that during the middle and those action scenes you should feed in the seeds that will grow into that black moment. The character's belief that all is lost has to be triggered by his desires and his developed personality. So work on this scene hone it until the emotion grips you. There are some books that when you read, even though you know the character will succeed, you as the writer or the reader will feel that bit of despair then you know you have found this point and realize something must follow.

Wednesday, March 14, 2012

Wednesday's Writing Advice - Strategy


Whether you're a seat of the pants author or a compulsive planner there are some points you need to consider when starting a book. Finding a middle path between the two styles is hard but it can be done. No matter what your style, there are two points of the story that need to be in your head before you can begin.

The first is the beginning. Now this doesn't mean the writer needs to know this as a specific scene. The need to know is the general event that triggers the story. Could it be a death, a disappearance, a disaster of nature. When sends the characters off on an adventure helps either style of writing.

The second is the ending. Again, this isn't a specific scene. What the writer needs to know is whether the story ends in happiness of tragedy. Knowing this will allow then to find the right words through out the story to bring their work to a satisfactory ending.

Once these two points are there the writer can decide if they're going to plan or they're going to just start writing, The trick to keep this going is to move from scene to scene rather than set your plan for the entire book in concrete or just go with the flow. Things happen during the writing of a story. Characters sometimes rebel about the direction they're headed. And this can happen no matter what style of writer you are. Flexibility is important.

For myself, I'm a planner, but I also do a lot of seat of the pants writing. I plan a scene or a chapter and then sit down to write it but when something takes a turn, I keep going and then change the plan for the next chapter. Another thing is that I'm a draft writer. For me this works. To sit and revise every scene before I go on to the next one would bother me. I need to know the whole story before I can go back and make the needed changes. That means planning again.

So no matter how you work, you need to have a strategy that allows you to finish the story. This is what I tell new writers when I'm involved in critiquing sessions. Finish the book. If you don't finish it you can never revise and revision is where the story becomes complete.