Come sleeper, wake and set aside your dreams
Arise and stretch - go forward into the day.
Ever knowing time flows in steady streams
From the peaks through valleys on their way.
Time does not stop nor does it even slow
It keeps a steady pulsing rhythmic beat
Our history in shortened instants grows.
Meander 2 - Critiquing - A friend is giving a short bit of lessons on critique groups. She read one of the lessons for us to critique on Saturday. She covered the points very well and we did have some comments. Mine was to remember the story you are critiquing isn't your story and not to be upset when people don't listen to what you say.
Meander 3 - Am really into Children of Fyre. The book is making changes from when I first thought of it. Bringing in conflicts is a great thing. Have three chapters well established and now there are but nine ot go.