Tuesday, March 23, 2021

Tuesday's Writer's Tip - Viewpoints Choices and Scenes #BWLAuthor #MFRWAuthor #Writing #Viewpoint

 The choice of viewpoints in a story is the author's but the author can also decide to change the viewpoint character or characters. Sometimes a number of characters are needed. Sometimes only one. There are times when during the writing of a story, another character needs to have a view. These scenes must be woven in soon and skillfully. I have a book that has one viewpoint and that's a murder series. I have another than has eight. The order is established in the beginning of the book This is important.

Now when you write scenes there are authors who throw in many viewpoints in a scene. This can be done skillfully but many times the reader begins to feel like they have whiplash and they don't care which character to root for. One rule is to maintain a scene in a single viewpoint. What if you want to switch viewpoints during a scene? Done with ease this can work. Some writers use some phrase to indicate the scene is changing viewpoints. The others make a decided break and start the next part of that sceen in the viepoint of a different character. No maatter what you choose, make sure the reader know through whose scenes the scene is talking place. And be very careful not to write something that looks to be in another character's viewpoint even for just one sentence,

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Monday, March 22, 2021

Meandering on Monday with Janet Lane Walters #BWLAuthor #@MFRWAuthor #Reading #Writing #Thoughts #Time change #Andre Norton

 Meander 1 - Reading - Returning to books from my earlier days of reading. I have a vast collection of Andre Norton's stories and this week they are on my schedule to read. She certainly pulls the reader along. Finished the Beast Master series and reading them was like meeting old friends again. Am now reading some of her others. When I finish the first collection, I'll read the several books I've picked up that are new.

Meander 2 - Thoughts - Time Change. It's been a few days since the dreaded time change and I've still not adjusted to the switch. This has put me behind schedule on a number of things. I usually wake at seven and start my day..Since the chnage it's been eight. Funny what the loss of an hour means. This playing iwth time I suppose must be a good idea but my body doesn't agree. Who knows when I'll catch up.

Meander 3 - Writing - Almost finished with a draft of Haunted Dreams. There will be some scenes to write again since they are new or drastically changed. Must be sure they fit the flow of the story. Then it's onto making the mss look good before I ship it off. Still looking at the end of April for this to happen.

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Sunday, March 21, 2021

Sunday's Book Murder and Poisoned Tea #BWLAuthor #MFRWAuthor #cizt mystery #Maine Coon Cat #Hudson Valley

 


The moment she hears his mastery of the organ, Katherine covets him as St. Stephen’s new Minister of Music. Handsome, charming and vastly talented, the women of the congregation adore him. Even Katherine is swayed by his manners and ability, But Roger not only brought beautiful music, he brings poisoned notes to the choir. Katherine seeks to find the secret of why he has changed churches yearly. She prays the discovery will be in time to prevent a tragedy.

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The Mrs. Miller Mysteries series is a sheer delight. Miss Marple and Jessica Fletcher would love Katherine Miller. I know I do. ~~ Writer Gail Roughton

Reviewed in the United States on July 8, 2017
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Saturday, March 20, 2021

Books by Rue Allyn are featured today on Saturday's Blurbs #MFRWAuthor #Knights Errant #One Moment's Pleasire Legendot Skinner Robelard #romance




 Knight Errant ~ Knight Chronicles Book 1:  Only a runaway bride stands between dour Sir Robert Clarwyn and his heart’s desire—the restoration of his family lands and honor. But capturing the lady is far from easy, and by the time Robert returns her to England for her royally decreed marriage she has captured his heart.


Ordered to marry a Scot for the good of England but against her will; outspoken and outrageous Lady Julian Verault escapes to the continent. Even after the king’s most skilled hunter finds her, she manages to evade every trap except love
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One Moment’s Pleasure ~ Wildfire Love Book 1:  One Moment’s Pleasure will become a lifetime’s passion when spinster, Edith Alden, embarks on a search for her missing sister. Pretending to be a rich bored woman looking for an interlude with an anonymous male Edith enters the San Francisco bordello where her sister was last seen. She escapes the bordello almost too easily, but she can’t escape the passion ignited by a stranger’s kiss.

Born and raised in the brothels of the California gold rush, Dutch Trahern worked for years to erase a childhood spent committing petty crimes and worse in order to survive. That past comes back to haunt him in the form of a woman he rescues from prostitution. Now his hard won respectability is threatened by an irresistible desire for a woman he shouldn’t want. 
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The Legend of Skinner Robelard ~ Legends Book 1:  Pampered and privileged then betrayed and disowned, Elise Van Demer hides in plain sight and plots her revenge on the men who destroyed her life. With her goal in sight, she encounters a lawman from her past. Boyd Alvarez could ruin everything, and the last thing she needs is wanting some man who only wants to protect her. Available Now.

 

Friday, March 19, 2021

Today Rue Allyn is visiting and talking about Who She Was Before #MFRWAuthor #USN Petty Officer #Writer #Travel #Romance #Contemporary

 What Were You Before

 

Day 1

  1. What were you before you became an author? Did this influence your choices as a writer?

Allow me to clarify a bit. I have always been a ‘writer.’ So in a sense, I was never anything before that. If we limit the meaning of ‘author’ to ‘professional,’ i.e, I get paid to write, I’ve been many things: Assembly line worker, receptionist, USN Petty Officer, Student of English literature and language (including modern, middle and old English), Instructor, Sales associate. Mom, Housekeeper (not professional),World Traveler, Daughter, Sister,  Wife etc. I could go on and produce a very long list.

 

Did any of this influence my choices as a writer? I think that answer is yes. I’ve used most (not all) of my life experiences in some way to enhance my books whether it be character, plot or setting. The single strongest influence has been my education in the English language. Learning to speak, read and write in Middle and Old gave me a love of the period we call the middle ages. Second to that influence would be my love of travel. My books are set all over the world and in a variety of time periods. In the US alone, my books are set anywhere from Wyoming to Texas to Louisiana, to New York. I have hundreds of settings yet to use, so I’m not planning on quitting the writing business any time soon. ðŸ˜Š

 

  1. Are you genre specific or general? I don’t mean major genres but subdivisions or romance, mystery or paranormal.

I am solely a romance author. I like reading other genres, but I write romance. My published work includes, Contemporary, Regency, Medieval, and Victorian/Western romance. I have a slightly paranormal series in the works but nothing published in that sub-genre of romance.

 

  1. What is your latest release? My newest release, Wait for Me, is a novella in the Bluestocking Belles Boxset Storm & Shelter. The collection is available for pre-order at a reduced price [click here] with an official release date of April 13, 2021. Here are the blurbs for both Wait for Me and Storm & ShelterWait for MeFate trumps nature, and these enemies became good friends then casual lovers. Only doubt and family secrets can keep them from sealing their love with marriage. Esmeralda Crobbin, aka the pirate Irish Red, and Captain, Lord Brandon Gilroy were enemies by nature who first met during a battle at sea. But fate trumps nature when a fierce storm creates a chance encounter and forced proximity. Brandon learns the pirate is a woman of serious honor and responsibility. Esmeralda discovers the captain is more than a uniform stuffed with rules and regulations. Both love the sea with boundless passion, but can they love each other?

 

Storm & ShelterWhen a storm blows off the North Sea and slams into the village of Fenwick on Sea, the villagers prepare for the inevitable: shipwreck, flood, land slips, and stranded travelers. The Queen’s Barque Inn quickly fills with the injured, the devious, and the lonely—lords, ladies, and simple folk; spies, pirates, and smugglers all trapped together. Intrigue crackles through the village, and passion lights up the hotel.

One storm, eight authors, eight heartwarming novellas.

 

  1. What are you working on now? I am currently working on a series of six more or less novella length stories about The MacKai Brides. These women are the sisters of the hero and highland laird, Baron Raeb MacKai, from my novel Knight Defender. I am in the early stages of series and story development, so it will be awhile before these are ready for release. If you want a glimpse of what these tales might be like, check out my Medieval Mumbles blog posts, starting with the one about The Taming of Iver MacTavish (working title).

 

  1. Do  your reading choices influence your choice of a writing career? I suppose so. Around age 13, I encountered Georgette Heyer’s regency romances and fell in love with the genre.

 

  1. Where can we find you? I may be found at:

 

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Thursday, March 18, 2021

Thursday's Opening Scene from Murder and Mint Tea #BWLAuthor #MFRWAuthor #cozy mystery #Hudson Valley

 

The pale winter sun shone through the kitchen window.  I cleaned up the last of the mess from my adventure.  The caper hadn’t gone as planned.  How many do?  In my many years of life, most of my plans have taken an unexpected turn.

Merup.”  Robespierre my Maine Coon cat announced a visitor on the way.  He’s almost as good as a doorbell.  The firm rap on the door told me this wasn’t one of my female friends.  “Come in.”

Pete Duggan strode across the room and thrust a bouquet of bright carnations into my hands.  A red hue, almost as vivid as his hair, stained his face.  “Mrs. Miller, got to hand it to you.  I’ve come to eat crow.”

To hide a smile I buried my face in the flowers and inhaled the spicy fragrance.  “How about chocolate chip cookies and mint tea instead?”

“Sounds great.”  He straddled one of the chairs at the table and picked up the local newspaper.  “Local Woman Thwarts Robbers.”  His grin made him look like the ten-year-old who had moved into the corner house on my block.  He cleared his throat.  “The guys at the station ribbed me about this.  Did you forget the plan?”

     How, when the idea to catch the real thieves had been mine?  A series of burglaries had plagued the neighborhood for months and had troubled me.  Especially when the police had decided two teenage neighbor boys were the culprits.  I knew the pair and had disagreed strongly enough to set myself up as a victim.  Then I informed Pete.

     “Did you forget?”  he repeated.  “When I crept up the stairs and saw you grappling with one of the men, I nearly had a heart attack.”

     Heat singed my cheeks.  “How was I to know my date would poop out early?”

     After filling two mugs with mint tea I opened a tin of freshly baked cookies.  How could I admit to a nagging doubt, or tell him I had wanted to be part of the action?  In July I had turned sixty-five and in September retired from the nursing staff at Tappan Zee Memorial Hospital.  Six months of placid existence had made me edgy.  Lunch with friends, coffee with the neighbors and weekly bridge games with old cronies bored me.  These events held none of the challenge of meeting crises at the hospital.

     Pete scowled.  “You could have gone to the Prescotts’ house.”

     “They’re away.”  I sipped the tea and savored the cool mint flavor.

     “The Randals’ them.”  He pulled the other mug across the table.  “The guys insist the two of us make one perfect cop.  Want to hire on?”

     “I’ve no desire for a third career.”  Until my husband’s death twenty-five years ago I had been the organist and choir director at St. Stephens Episcopal Church.  Needing a way to support myself and my son, I enrolled in the nursing program at the community college.  “Besides, I’m too old.”

     “Old, never.  You look the same as when we moved here.”

     “It’s the dye.”  His puzzled look tickled me.  Dyeing my hair makes me look younger.  “I came into the world with red hair and I intend to leave the same way.”

     Laughter rumbled deep in his chest.  “A worthy ambition you nearly fulfilled last night.”  He touched my hand.  “Thanks again.  You kept me from making a mistake that could have ruined those boys.”

     I lifted my mug and inhaled the aromatic steam.  The evidence against the pair had been circumstantial and strong.  They had done odd jobs at all the houses that had been burglarized.  “I’ve known them since they were infants.  Nothing I’ve ever seen in their actions to make me believe they were guilty.”

     Pete made a face.  “I’ve known them just as long.  Didn’t stop me from suspecting them.  How could you be sure?”

     “Forty years of living in the same house has attuned me to the rhythms of the neighborhood.”

     “Twenty years hasn’t helped me.”

 

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Wednesday, March 17, 2021

Wednesday The Cancer Capricorn Connection #MFRWHooks #BWLAuthor #Romance #medical #astrology

 






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BLURB:

She’s a Cancer and he’s a Capricorn. She has a secret she wants to keep but moments after they meet again, he realizes that her daughter is his, and he wants to be part of their life.

Memories of the past and her hurt brings Cate’s old anger back to the surface but Rick realizes what a fool he was in his single-minded desire to follow his dream. He now has the medical degree he desired enough to set his love for Cate aside. His guilt and her anger clash as they try to find ways to show their daughter how much they love her.

Genre – Contemporary Romance

First Line: Cate Rollins stood in the sun-filled kitchen of the house she’d rented and opened another box.
Review:

Cate Rollins lost Rick Somers when he drove to the west coast after their high school graduation. She thought he loved her, but he never returned…until 9 years later.

“Opposites” is a great descriptive word for Cate and Rick’s personalities. Ms. Lane Walters’ develops an excellent story-line between the two with even a few surprises. There’s more to Cate’s life than she knows and more to Rick’s than he knows – and when the two reconnect a firestorm shakes them both awake and rekindles the smolder. The story sends the reader into a battle of wills and will nots full of emotions from the past and the present, along with recreating tensions (sensual and anger issues).

If you’re looking for a fast-paced, quick read, this is an entertaining story with a happy ending, and I look forward to reading another of this series.
Reviewed in the United States on November 8, 2018
Cate returns to Eastlake with her young daughter, Maddie. She is there to take up the position as head of their new rehab centre. Newly arrived, and about to settle in her home, who should move in opposite but Rick, Maddie’s father, the man who left her without learning that she was pregnant, to pursue his personal dreams of becoming a top surgeon. Once he realises Maddie is his daughter he wants to become a father in all senses of the world. But, has he left it too late? Will the pair ever be able to reconcile their differences
EXCERPT

The rumble of a motorcycle clamped a vise on Cate’s shoulder muscles. She hated this conditioned reaction which occurred every time she heard a bike. In the city there’d been hundreds of these near panic attacks. She glanced at her friends and hoped they hadn’t noticed. Questions would follow and she had no intention of answering. She drew a deep breath. Her hands clenched. Her heart fluttered like the wings of a humming bird.

The image of a dark-haired, dark-eyed man leaped into her thoughts. He’d stolen her heart and tossed the discarded remains in the garage heap. Rick Somers had been the only male member of the Gang.

When the bike pulled into the driveway of a large house on the other side of the street, her vision blurred. How could she live in this house having to hear that sound night and day?

The rider dismounted and pulled off his helmet revealing dark curly hair. He turned and she knew his identity. She froze. He stared for a moment and then waved.

“Is that who I think it is?” Jenessa asked.

“Didn’t you believe me when I told you what Dad said?” Megan asked.

Cate jumped to her feet. She had to hide Maddie. She paused at the door and turned to look at her friends.

“Are you all right?” Liz asked.

“Yes…No…” She opened the door.

“Do you mind if we ask him what he’s doing here?” Jenessa asked.

With a nonchalant gesture, Cate waved her hand. She needed to be alone and to think about what this would mean to her and to her daughter. “Go ahead.”

“Are you coming?” Megan asked.

“I’ll pass.” Once the panic ebbed, anger rose. Had anyone known he was coming to Eastlake? Did he know the people who lived in that huge house across the street?

Megan, Jenessa and Lauren strolled across the street. They engaged Rick in animated 

Tuesday, March 16, 2021

Tuesday's Writer's Tip - Viewpoint- Multiple Chracters #BWLAuthor #MFRWAuthor #Tip #Writing #Viewpoint #Multiple Characters

 Especially in longer works multiple viewpoints are used. I've been guilty of this a number of times and I like showing the story from many character's viewpoints. I once used this as a vehicle to do vanishing characters. A number of the characters were killed leaving only the heroine, the villain and the hero standing when the book ended. There are tricks to doing this.

One of the tricks is to take a bit longer to make the character come alive and for the reader to form a bond with them. Another trick is to perhaps show some of the characters in the opening scenes and how they relate to each other. This I used in the Affinities series, starting iwth one character and bringing her two brothers and sisters into her opening scene. The only character not there was the fifth character who became their friend.

Another trick is to have an event surrounding them like a fire that effects a number of people. This is called building connections and is very necessary.

Keeping the switches simple can help. Using them to advance the story is another way. Take time to let the reader know you'll be writing in a second character's view for a time. Referring to the next viewpoint character by name or wondering where they are located can be another way to alert the reader. Don't clutter the openign scene with too many characters in too short a time perion. Introduce them slowly rather than have a scene where there are a dozen characters vieing for the reader's attention.

Keep these scenes active. Static scenes don't do much for the reader/

So choose your method of choosing a viewpoint character or characters for a story with care.

 

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Monday, March 15, 2021

Meandering on Monday with Janet Lane Walters #BWLAuthor #MFRWAuthor #Reading #Writing #Thoughts - the bill signed

 Meander 1 - Reading - Read a number of books last week. Final Response - E R Yatscoff - What a great read and if you like tension galore this is the book for you. During the story, the tension grew so much I was dancing in my chair. Great book. Hester Dymock - Victoria Chatham - one of the best Regency romances I've read for a long time. The hero as a patient kept me chuckling. The small hits of humor make this a book to remember. All That Shines - Diane Bator - a great mystery with the murder of a character who seemed to deserve what he received. Enjoyed all the little fashion details. A Traditional Affair - Joanie MacNeil - a nice romance with one of the mist alpha heros I've encountered for a long time with some interesting twists. That's it forthe week.

Meander 2 - Thoughts - The bill that passed. I am so glad the bill passed for the COVID relief and that people who deserve money and help will receive it. I probably won't receive any money but that's all right. I'm glad for the people whs will. What bothers me is the men and women who did not vote to pass it. Seems to me they're cowards and I sure hope their base understands how they have been dissed by these poplitical leaders who care only for the rich and have no concern for the poor and the middle-class.

Meander 3 - Writing - I am well past the halfway mark on the current draft of Haunted Dreams and an finally getting the time line to behave. Sometimes I had to laugh. In one scene I had the ambulance arrive and in the next scene it arrived part way into the scene. The next draft will smooth out the added passages and do all the little things in formatting to make the book shine. Looking forward to next month when I should finish. 

 

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Sunday, March 14, 2021

Sunday's Book - Murder and Mint Tea #BWLAuthor #MFRWAuthor #Mystery #Cozy #Hudson Valley

 


This is BWL's free Book for the month of March

Katherine is a retired nurse and a retired church organist. The small Hudson River village where she lives in her Victorian “Painted Lady” makes her the neighborhood matriarch. Along with her Maine Coon Cat Robespierre, she guards friends and families.

When amoral Rachel moves into the first floor apartment of Katherine’s house, trouble erupts. The murder weapon is one she recognizes and makes her fear for her friends and family. Finding the killer becomes her goal.

Editorial Review
Murder and Mint Tea is a gem in its genre, combining the voice of a classic American whodunit with that of a traditional British detective novel. Murder She Wrote meets Miss Marple in a beautifully crafted tale that makes the reader want to reach into the pages and dispense justice to the villainess themselves. ~ Writer Gail Roughton

Reviewed in the United States on December 24, 2019
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Yes, the book unfolds slowly, exactly as you can imagine such events happening. A glamorous young divorced woman and her children, boy and girl, move into a friendly, safe, pleasant neighborhood and rent the downstairs of a lovely old house. Pretty quickly, the landlady, a retired nurse with deep roots in her community, learns that her renters, foisted off on her by a trusted friend of her son, are trouble. Not the daughter, who both brother and mother treat as a live-in slave, but the boy, who is malicious and aggressive. Bit by bit, Mrs. Miller realizes that she has not one but two sociopaths living downstairs, because the mother proves to be a toxic personality. Plenty of creepy crawlies as you read, and piece by piece the true crime aspects of this "it could happen here" story unfolds. What I liked best about the book were the well-observed and true to life characters as well as the unsettling description of the unraveling of what has been a nearly idyllic neighborhood. I also loved the fact that Mrs. Miller is a mature woman and that her wisdom and her insights do have impact upon setting the world to rights again.

Reviewed in the United States on May 17, 2018
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Mrs. Katherine Miller spends her days enjoying her friends and family and she's anxious for a new tenant in her downstairs apartment. Her son, Andrew, has found a woman with two children who will sign a year's lease.
The woman, Rachel, turns out to be loud, obnoxious, neglectful of her children, and seductive to any man in her vicinity.
Katherine worries about the woman's abused daughter and takes Susie under her wing.
This is more a slice of life story than a mystery. The murder happens nearly at the end of the novel, and the perpetrator surprised me.
I enjoyed the different characters in the neighborhood and Katherine is kind and good-hearted. She should have been more assertive with nasty Rachel. The woman threatened her several times, and Katherine should have reported her to the authorities for that and the obvious child abuse, which might have gotten Rachel evicted.
Of course, that would have ruined the ending. A good read for a rainy day.