Sunday, May 10, 2015

Sunday's Book - Shattered Dreams by Janet Lane Walters #MFRWauthor #BooksWeLove



Moonchild Series, Book 1 


Torn apart years ago by lies and threats, Rafe Marshall returns to town and confronts Manon Lockley. She has been told he died on the night he stood her up for their senior prom.

When she faints, Rafe catches her and realizes he hasn’t stopped loving her. Manon carries anger and now grief that wasn’t real. Rafe wants her in his life, but she doesn’t want to talk about what happened in the past. She can’t be sure if her father or someone else told lies about Rafe and she doesn’t want to know. Can Rafe persuade her to listen? Not without a battle.

4.0 out of 5 stars Here's to a good ending December 28, 2013
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  The story of the death of young love and the birth of adult love. It is the in between that gets you. Also the knowledge that you can't stop real love.


Manon gets stood up on prom night by her boyfriend Rafe to then be told he's dead, twelve years later he walks back into her life and she doesn't know what to do or think, has everything for the last twelve years been lies, why did he leave and who told her he was dead. Rafe has always loved Manon, the accident left him with scars and gaps in his memory to finally fully get his life back he needs to talk to Manon and by sorting out the past he can then move on with his future hopefully with her.
This was an interesting book which starts with the twelve year anniversary of Rafe's death and together we discover what actually happened all those years ago.

Saturday, May 9, 2015

Saturday's Blurbs - Books by Shirley Martin


 "Night Secrets" A man and a woman who fear to love each other must work together to save the kingdom from betrayal.
 
"Night Shadows"  Three men desire Fianna, but she loves only one.
 
"Enchanted Cottage"  A woman, marred on the outside, and a man, afflicted on the inside, meet in an isolated cottage. There, they learn that they can help each other. And with a bit of magic, miracles can happen.
 
"Dream Weaver"   Sent back in time, Gwen must save her lover's life. She failed him once before She can't fail him again.
 
"Temptation:  From the glittering nightclubs of Miami Beach to the dreaded dungeons of medieval France, get ready for a wild ride.
 
http://amzn.to/1zN7YAq  This is the link for buying any of my books at Amazon. Readers can scroll through my Author Page.
  

  

Friday, May 8, 2015

Friday - Shirley Martin is talking about Heroes, Heroines and Villains #MFRWauthor #BooksWeLove


          
1. Do you write a single genre or do your fingers flow over the keys creating tales in many forms? Does your reading choices reflect your writing choices? Are there genres you wouldn’t attempt?  Janet, thanks for hosting me. I began writing historicals, but in the past few years I've written in the paranormal and fantasy genres. I read mostly fantasy and paranormal. I wouldn't attempt mystery or horror, nor sci/fi.
 
2. Heroes, Heroines, Villains. Which are your favorite to write? Does one of these come easy and why? I like writing them all. Possibly villains come easiest, although it would be difficult to say why.
 
3. Heroes. How do you find them? Do pictures, real life or plain imagination create the man you want every reader to love? Do they come before the plot or after you have the idea for the story? The plot always comes first for me. I create heroes from my imagination. I try to create them with alpha and beta qualities. I don't like the arrogant pure alpha hero.
 

4. Heroines. How do you find them? Do pictures, real life or imagination create the woman you want the reader to root for? Do they appear before the plot or after you have the idea for the story? As before, the plot comes first. Heroines come from my imagination. I don't like the kick-butt type of heroine. I like to make them spunky, but I don't overdo it.
 
5. Villains or villainesses or an antagonist, since they don’t always have to be the bad guy or girl. They can be a person opposed to the hero’s or heroine’s obtaining their goal. How do you choose one? How do you make them human?  i try to start out making the villain likeable so that the reader can't immediately identify him as the villain. Yes, I know he/she doesn't have to be a bad guy (or girl).In my fantasy romance, "Night Secrets" Aradia is the villainess, and she is evil.
 
6. What is your latest release? Who is the hero, heroine and or the villain? My latest is "Temptation" a contemporary vampire romance. Varik is the vampire hero. Jennifer is the heroine, and she's a schoolteacher. Celestia is the villainess, and she is also a vampire.  
 
7. What are you working on now? I'm working on a fantasy romance, tentatively titled "Love's Journey."
 
8. How can people find you?
            Website My website is undergoing renovation.
            Blog http://authorshirleymartin.blogspot.com
            Twitter--https://twitter.com/mshirley1496
            Facebook https://www.facebook.com/shirley.martin716970

Thursday, May 7, 2015

Thursday's Villain - The Nomarch of Mero from Bast's Warrior #MFRWauthor #BooksWeLove

The trilogy that includes Bast's Warrior, Horu's Chosen and Toth's Priest has one villain that runs through the series. But there are other villains in the stories. In Bast's Warrior, the Nomarch of Mero is a villain. This scene shows him and his inaction with the hero.

Kashe of Mero sat on his bed in his chamber of the family compound. His head pounded. When he opened his eyes he saw the day had progressed into late afternoon. The bright light made him wince. He recalled the past night’s celebration for the retirement of the family’s arms master who had been his mentor and friend. From the Tuten he had learned the skills of a warrior. Last night Kashe had finally defeated his mentor with weapons and a capacity for beer.

“Kashe.” His father’s voice stabbed like a dagger.

He groaned and sat up. The drum in his head banged. Leave me alone, he wanted to shout. The Nomarch of Mero’s anger toward his middle son was nothing new. What did he want now?

As second son Kashe had been marked for the priesthood. He had no desire to become a priest. He found satisfaction in his role as a warrior. Yet, duty called for obedience.

If any other temple had been chosen he might have agreed. He had no taste for this newly risen cadre of men seeking to force their god into the circle of goddesses and gods of the Two Lands. Aken Re had been unknown until the invaders had arrived. The army of those men had been defeated so why did their priests linger?The beaded curtain jangled adding cacophonic notes to the beating in his head.
“Answer me.” The nomarch entered and halted at the foot of Kashe’s bed. “Rise and present yourself in the central hall. We have guests. Your older brother has news of importance.”

Kashe groaned. He and Pian were a year apart in age and generations in philosophy. In embracing the new religion, His brother had seen an advantage for bringing his ambitions to fruition. He believed the priests would smooth his path to the pharaoh’s chair.

Kashe sat on the edge of the bed and considered his brother and his plans. Pian was slender and shorter than Kashe. He fit the picture of an ideal pharaoh in appearance but not in character. He was cruel and selfish. His sense of justice and honor were lacking. He had no love for Kashe.

“Throwback” was the mildest of the names Pian used as needles to jab his younger brother. Kashe had strengths his brother lacked. Every match on the training field had ended with Kashe as the victor.

He rose. He couldn’t help that in stature and build he resembled the Nubian ancestors his father and older brother chose to forget in their desire for power. If Pian became pharaoh the Nomarch of Mero would become his son’s chief advisor.

“Are you coming?” his father asked.

If he said no who knew what would happen. Kashe stretched. “As soon as I wash and dress.” Though he would rather have bathed he would make do here. He glanced in the polished metal mirror. His warrior’s braid was neat enough. He poured water from a pitcher into a basin and washed. After donning a fresh kilt he fitted wrist and arm bands and selected a collar necklace.

As he left the family sleeping quarters he braced for the evening meal, the main one of the day. He entered the central hall and hid a desire to duck behind one of the pillars. On the dais his parents sat with a pair of priests. Their gold medallions glittered in the torch light. His older brother stood before the men.

As Kashe neared the platform he noticed the robes were embroidered with gold-rayed discs representing their god. The pair were opposites. One was rotund, smiling and fluttering his hands while speaking. The other was lean with a hawk-like nose and a somber expression. Kashe noticed his younger brother lingered in the shadows near the dais. If anything was to be learned Namose would know.

The nomarch gestured. He strode past his sisters who were engaged in a board game and gossip.

When Pian’s voice took on a tone both servile and arrogant Kashe grimaced.

“My lords, Oris and Hebu, beloved of Aken Re, has the daughter been found? I so desire to look in her face and claim her as my chief wife. The honor you offer humbles me.”

The rotund priest’s smile broadened. “As yet we have not found her, but the signs point to where she is hidden. When the auspicious hour arrives we will claim her.” He turned from Pian to the nomarch. “You know the price.”

The nomarch pointed to Kashe. “My lords of Aken Re, this is my middle son. He is skilled with weapons and has a vast knowledge of strategy. He will enter your temple as a priest.”

Both men studied Kashe. Their gazes moved from his head to his feet. Embarrassment and shame over the avidity of their appraisal made him flush. He was not some piece of livestock or a slave to be purchased. A cauldron of anger bubbled.

Oris rubbed his fleshy hands. “Indeed, he is magnificent.”

The thin priest’s eyes narrowed. He addressed his companion in an unfamiliar language. “Nomarch, he will do nicely,” he added.

Kashe wanted to rub his arms to ward off a sudden chill, but he wouldn’t allow the pair to see his distaste and fear. He kept his gaze steady and examined the thin priest. Hebu’s eyes were serpent-like, dull and flat. Kashe’s hands formed fists. Though Oris had been named as the chief priest, his companion was the more dangerous of the pair. Another thing became clear. Hebu belonged to the defeated enemy. Kashe had heard that language from a prisoner his father had brought to the compound as a slave.

Oris nodded. “He will be the perfect battle leader for our men.”

Wednesday, May 6, 2015

Wednesday's Writer's Tip - More on Defining the Basic Conflict #MFRWauthor


The character's environment has a lot to do with how they react to other characters and helps the plot progress. Last week five were mentioned. Here are five more.

The character is placed in an environment he wants to escape. I can think of a number of places. Some are evident and some not. Right now I'm working with a hero who wants to escape the hospital. He was shot and he wants to make light of his reason for being there. A patient could want to escape prison. In all genres there can be a character who wants to escape a particular environment and each will go about this in their own way. Think of some disaster like a forest fire. The character might want to escape poverty or a dozen other reasons for the character to want to escape.

What about the character who finds him or herself in a place where he or she isn't wanted. This could conjure a number of kinds of stories. The girl who wants to play baseball and is good. Imagine her on a boy's team. The debutante who must help in a soup kitchen. Think about putting your character where no one wants them and how do they act or react?

How about one for which the character is unsuited? The character must come to grips with things he doesn't understand. How will he act or react to the situation and to the people who are suited to this particular environment?

A change in the character's status quo in an environment could be the basis of a good story. This is usually based on a decision by the character to act in a different manner. Refusing a promotion could be one. Not wanting to continue on the path the character has taken. Take the dancer who decides she or he can't dance any longer. Why was this decision made? How will the change sit with the other people in their environment?

A change in the status quo of the environment. An earthquake, a war, some disaster could change the environment and thus the characters who exist in that time and place.

So study the character's environment and use one or more of the environmental situations and you'll have the seeds for a good story.

Tuesday, May 5, 2015

Tuesday's Inspiration based on a quote from Lajos Egri #MFRWauthor

"What is a character? A factor whose virtues have not yet been discovered." Interesting quote with a lot of meaning in a few words.

When I or any other writer sets out to start a story, much may be known about this character. Reams of material have been jotted down, a character sheet may have been written, characteristics taken from life, psychology, or even Astrology. But the character is still unknown.

Until the character acts and interacts with other characters, with the environment, with his inner fears, the character is unknown. Those characteristics, those lists written down may no longer be what the character is. These traits may have changed as the character changes during the writing of the story.

So to know the character he must be presented with a problem and shown acting and reacting to the character. I never know my characters until I've gone through a story in a rough draft and perhaps even a second re-writing of the story. Suddenly the character develops into a person I know. He is no longer a factor. I have discovered his virtues. He becomes the same and yet different that the man or woman who first leaped onto the page.

Monday, May 4, 2015

Meandering on Monday with Janet Lane Walters #MFRWauthor


Meander 1 - I sort of had a hallucination but not really. Visiting my husband at rehab center and waiting for him to be ready to head to the dining room. There is a huge window in his room. I turned my head and gasped. What looked like a snow blizzard filled the window. Now I'll admit this winter was a snowy one with snow continuing into spring but this is May. Then realized what I saw was a storm of white blossoms from nearby trees.

Meander 2 - Lists. I am back to making lists to make sure I finish everything I need to do. List really are fun and crossing things off makes one feel as if they've accomplished something. The one problem I find is that often when one item is crossed off another one takes its place. Sometimes there are two. Take bills. Pay bills was on my list and I sent them off before the mail came. There was a bill or two tucked into the junk mail. So the crossed off item returned. Do you keep lists and do they grow rather than shorten?

Meander 3 - Writing is moving slowly but that's what happens around here. I'm waiting for 2 books to come back from the editors so I can do the final proof. Divided Dreams is going well. I'm to the next to last chapter and it's the one where exciting things happen. Let's hope I can pull it off. And part of writing is promotion and keeping one's website up to date, What I have to do is have my web mistress remove 6 books and add 8 plus the two that are coming.

Sunday, May 3, 2015

Sunday's Book - Lines of Fire by Janet Lane Walters #MFRWauthor #BooksWeLove

Lines of Fire (The Guild House - Defenders Hall)

To honor a promise made to his dying father, Alric trains as a Defender. For some reason the Swordmaster wishes him gone and his first two bondings end in failure. A failed third one will see Alric banished. His meeting with the older daughter of the Swordmaster reveals a double heart bond, but she has been promised to Petan, the Swordmaster’s favorite. A duel is fought and though Alric can read Petan’s lines of fire, the other dueler cheats and nearly kills Alric. Petan is banished but he knows secret ways into Defenders Hall. Kalia, his now bondmate’s lines are tarnished. Not only do Alric and Kalia need to find Petan, they must learn how to cleanse her lines.


4.0 out of 5 stars Good story January 20, 2013
Format:Kindle Edition|Verified Purchase
This was a good story. I liked the characters and the world created. The "lines of fire" was an interesting concept. I especially liked this idea and how it was revealed and used within the story. However, this book could have been so much more. I would have liked the characters to be fleshed out more and with greater emotion. It needed more explanation of the background details. Sentences were choppy and hard to follow at times. Characters had little physical descriptions and that drove me crazy as I always work to create a picture of them and the world they live in as I read. Truly, this is a good story and a good read. I do recommend you read it. 


5.0 out of 5 stars Here's a hero you can fall in love with July 19, 2014
Format:Kindle Edition|Verified Purchase
Everything you would expect from a Paranormal romance. 

Saturday, May 2, 2015

Saturday's Blurbs - Books by Vijaya Schartz



BELOVED CRUSADER (medieval fantasy
romance):
http://amzn.com/B00W3T24PK 
1096 AD - To redeem a Pagan curse,
Palatina the Fae braves the Christian world to embark on an expedition to free
the Holy Sepulcher in Jerusalem from the Turks. Pierre de Belfort, Christian
Knight of Lorraine, swore never to let a woman rule his life, and doesn't
believe in love. Thrown together into the turmoil of the First Crusade, on a
sacred journey to a land of fables, they must learn to trust each other. For in
this war, the true enemy is not human... and discovery could mean burning at the
stake.

CURSE OF THE LOST ISLE - Boxed set - Books 1 - 4 (medieval fantasy
romance)
http://amzn.com/B00VGMYSCM 
From history shrouded in myths, emerges a
family of immortal Celtic Ladies, who roam the medieval world in search of
salvation from a curse. For centuries, imbued with hereditary gifts, they hide
their deadly secret, stirring passions in their wake as they fight the Viking
hordes, send the first knights to the Holy Land, give birth to kings and
emperors... but if the Church ever suspects what they really are, they will be
hunted, tortured, and burned at the stake. 5 stars on Amazon "Edgy Medieval,
yay!"

ANAZ-VOOHRI - Ancient Enemy Book 1 (action sci-fi
romance)
http://amzn.com/B004A90FZM 
In Vijaya Schartz' "Anaz-Voohri"
published by Books We Love, the Anaz-voohri have returned from the stars after
eight hundred years, to claim the planet of their ancestors... a blue orb named
Earth. Since he witnessed the abduction of his baby sister by an alien creature,
Zack will stop at nothing to rescue her, even if it means joining the Special
Forces. But Tia Vargas, the reckless Amazon training the secret unit for a
highly classified mission, has no use for this handsome, rebellious recruit, at
least not on the battlefield, until Zack's farfetched stories prove to be true,
and tragedy strikes...

ALIEN LOCKDOWN
http://amzn.com/B00495XUT0 
The year
is 3033, and deep in the bowels of the underground galactic prison, something
has gone terribly wrong. Rhonda Alendresis never wanted this prison job. When
the civilians vanish and an earthquake damages the nuclear reactor, she must go
down to repair it with Captain Perfect himself, Cole Riggeur, who always plays
by the rules and never trusted a woman in his life. But deep in the underground
penitentiary, the most wicked convicts in the Galaxy are loose, and a
treacherous shape-shifter plans his revenge. Disconnected from the Garrison,
against impossible odds, Cole and Rhonda now face their greatest challenge...
trusting each other in order to survive.


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Blasters, Swords, Romance with a Kick 
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Friday, May 1, 2015

Friday - Vijaya Schartz Talking About Heroes, Heroines and Villains #MFRWauthor #BooksWeLove

 
 
1. Do you write a single genre or do your fingers flow over the keys
creating tales in many forms? Does your reading choices reflect your writing
choices? Are there genres you wouldn't attempt?
I write all over the place,
because I like to read different things. Like when I read, varying the kind of
stories I write prevents me from being bored. My inspiration flows better when I
alternate. In my case, it's science fiction, medieval fantasy, or contemporary
romance. I also vary the lengths, novels and novellas, sometimes an entire
series.
 
2. Heroes, Heroines, Villains. Which are your favorite to write?
Does one of these come easy and why?
I love my protagonists, of course, but I
also have a reputation for writing the worst (and by worst these reviewers mean
the best) villains. I enjoy developing and refining my bad guys. I make them
believable, strongly motivated, and intelligent. I believe the stronger the
villain, the more heroic the hero or heroine will have to be to defeat him (or
her).
 
3. Heroes. How do you find them? Do pictures, real life or plain
imagination create the man you want every reader to love? Do they come before
the plot or after you have the idea for the story?
Before I start writing, I
know my hero from the inside. I know his motivations, his strengths, his
weaknesses, and what makes him tick. What he looks like will be determined by
the genre, and what I discover along the way, whether it's his birth place, his
race (or species if it's science fiction) his occupation, etc. A young business
executive will not look the same as a seasoned medieval warrior, a Native
American shape shifter, a Chinese super Ninja, or a genetically enhanced Space
Marine. Once I know what he looks like, I do search for corresponding pictures
on the web, and I use them for inspiration. Sometimes I create picture boards
for my book. Depending on the publisher, some of these pictures might end up on
the book cover.
 
4. Heroines. How do you find them? Do pictures, real life or
imagination create the woman you want the reader to root for? Do they appear
before the plot or after you have the idea for the story?
I try to vary the
looks of my heroines. Again I know them from the inside when I brainstorm the
story. They are always strong, often wear a uniform or carry guns, swords,
blasters. With very few exceptions, they kick butt. By the time I look at
pictures on the web, I already know what she looks like, and finding a picture
to represent her is often a challenge.
 
5. Villains or villainesses or an
antagonist, since they don't always have to be the bad guy or girl. They can be
a person opposed to the hero's or heroine's obtaining their goal. How do you
choose one? How do you make them human?
This is a trick question for me,
because not all my villains are human. Sometimes they are of a different species
(alien or part alien), and sometimes they are immortals, even gods. Yet, no
matter what we are, we all have deep motivations, and I make sure theirs are
clear and easy to understand for the reader. We can all relate to the thirst for
power, the lure of riches, pride, revenge... my secret is, that in his mind the
villain is the hero of his own story. In the Archangel series, I have the
reptilian devil himself being harassed and belittled by his nagging wife. It was
fun to write.
 
6. What is your latest release? Who is the hero, heroine and
or the villain?
BELOVED CRUSADER is Book 6 in the Curse of the Lost Isle
medieval fantasy romance series. The hero is a Christian Knight who embarks on
the first Crusade in hopes of erasing his Pagan origins. He swore never to be
like his father, who let a woman rule his life. The heroine is Palatina the Fae,
seeking redemption from a curse. She is immortal, and Pagan. An erudite, she is
curious by nature. But in this Christian world, discovery could mean burning at
the stake. I have two villains in this story. One is the Great Goddess herself,
who turns against the heroine for disobeying and questioning her faith. The
other villain is a Naga shape shifter, half serpent half man, an instrument of
the Goddess, and possibly the Prince of Darkness himself. This is the first of
my villains to be irredeemably dark.
 
7. What are you working on
now?
Something shorter, lighter, a contemporary romance novella titled "Asleep
in Scottsdale" featuring a young CEO with a sleeping disorder. The heroine is a
sleep therapist. The villain is... well, I don't want to spoil the read, since
it's a bit of a mystery and the twisted bad guy is only revealed quite late in
the story. Still, you can expect danger at every turn, a strong, intelligent
heroine, and sizzling romance.

Then Book 7 in the Curse of the Lost Isle
medieval fantasy series will feature yet another sister, Meliora the Fae, whose
curse is to live as a recluse on Mount Ararat, with only a magic hawk for
companion, forever forbidden to love... Since it's a romance, you can see where
this is going.
 
8. How can people find you?
            Website
http://www.vijayaschartz.com 
            Blog
http://medievalnovels.blogspot.com/ 
            Twitter
https://twitter.com/Vijayaschartz
            Facebook
https://www.facebook.com/vijaya.schartz