Sunday, October 3, 2010

Six Sentence Sunday

Here's more from The Henge Betrayed -- Confrontations. Introducing the third focus character

Sydli groaned. Four days after leaving the Rover's camp they entered Easren to find rain and more rain. Shards of discontent gnawed her thoughts. Instead of going to this princedom they could have traveled to Nortren. She knew the doma's reasoning made sense but she wanted to show her father and half-brother what she had become. In minutes, she and her friends could have Mandir begging for mercy.


Anonymous said...

Nice six, Janet. You're piqued my interest!

Taryn Kincaid said...

I know this is a series and the characters were introduced in previous books, but without knowing that, I'm not sure if, just reading this alone, I'd have any idea who this character was. I think I need a little more character if it's a character intro.