Sunday, September 19, 2010

My Six Sentences even though they're not in the mix

Wanted to do this but had no desire to switch my email delivers. But here goes.

The time has come. Ash bolted upright. Her heart pounded with the beat of a mad drummer. Her gaze swept the room and she saw the seven other young women slept. Had someone spoken on the winds or had the words been part of a dream she couldn't remember? When her racing heard slowed she cautiously opened her senses to read the winds of the keep.

1 comment:

Taryn Kincaid said...

I've heard and/or read this a few times now. I think this is the best version.