Wednesday, October 7, 2020

Wednesday Divided Dreams #MFRWHooks @BWLAuthor #Contemporary Romance #Gemini #Cancer #Writer #Nurse Practitioner

 


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Rob Grantlan has given up medicine to become an author. As a Gemini, having two careers seems just right. His quiet days are overturned by the death of his wayward sister and his taking guardianship of his two month old niece. When he learns the father of the infant is his old flame Andi Sherman’s brother a plan unfolds. Years ago, he hurt her. He still loves her and he wants to regenerate that love. Andi Sherman is now a nurse practitioner in Pediatrics. She has vowed never to return to Fern Lake. The offer of a partnership in a friend’s practice is tempting. She refuses until she learns Rob has given up the practice of medicine. She believes he will leave town. On the day after her July birthday, she returns and comes upon the accident, finds the dying woman and the baby. When she learns the little girl is her niece and Rob hasn’t left town she is conflicted. She still loves him but she can’t trust him. News from her brother brings a threat. Will Tammy’s presence in their lives find a way to allow them to love and trust again?



Excerpt:

An ambulance blocked his way. EMTs unloaded a gurney. A third carried an occupied infant seat.

Rob glanced at the swollen face of the woman as the gurney sped past. He stared. Even though her face was bruised he knew her. “Patricia.”

The doors closed. His plans for the day changed. He couldn’t leave until he knew why his sister was here, and why an infant had come with her. He looked toward the drive expecting to see a second ambulance. Had his sister caused another accident? He sucked in a breath and entered the treatment area.

“Dr. Grantlan, can I help you?” a nurse asked.

“The woman who just arrived. She’s my sister. Where is she?”

She pointed to one of the curtained cubicles. Rob drew the cloth aside and viewed the scene. An ED physician issued orders. One nurse slid an IV needle into Patricia’s arm. Another placed a mask and adjusted the flow of oxygen.

Rob gestured to the doctor. “Her name is Patricia Grantlan. What’s her condition?”

The doctor turned. “There’s internal bleeding. Dr. Reed just arrived and we’re taking her to the OR.”

Rob stepped to the gurney. He touched his sister’s hand. “Patricia.”

Her eyelids fluttered open. So did her mouth. The mask muffled her words. He leaned closer.

“Hurts…He did…Take care of…”

A nurse opened the curtain. “They’re ready for her.” She hung a unit of blood and stepped aside.

“Do you want to observe?” the ER doctor asked.

Rob shook his head. “I’ll take care of the paperwork and stay in the ED waiting room to hear the news.”

As they wheeled his sister away Rob strode to the waiting room door. What had Patricia meant by her words? Had someone hurt her? Was she in danger? Who should he care for?

He stopped at the admissions’ desk. “I’m here about the woman who just arrived by ambulance.”

The clerk looked up. “Dr. Grantlan, do you know her? The EMTs had no idea. They found no identification, but they left two suitcases I was about to open.”

“Her name is Patricia Grantlan.” At her startled gasp he continued. “She’s my sister, but I have no idea if she has insurance. I’ll handle the bills.”

She passed a clipboard holding several forms to him. “Fill these out as best as you can.”

Rob retreated to a seat at the rear of the room. He added as much information as he could. After returning the forms the clerk gave him the suitcases. He returned to his seat on one of the plastic chairs facing a television tuned to a cooking show.

A young woman with light brown hair entered. A diaper bag hung from her shoulder. She must be the baby’s mother. Relief rolled like a stream released from a beaver’s dam. Patricia hadn’t caused a fatality. The young woman stopped at the desk.

Who was she? Though curious, knowing wouldn’t halt the thoughts galloping through his head. Something about the way she stood with one hand on her hip drew him and made him think he knew her. Her shorts revealed long tanned legs. Would her face match the rear view?

He groaned. She reminded him of Andi Sherman. Why think of her now? He’d ruined any chance of a future with her. Twelve years ago, he’d followed his father’s demands and told her he didn’t love her. Once more the words spoken in a steel-coated voice slid into his thoughts.

You want to go to college and become a doctor. Though that’s not my choice for you, I’ll accept your decision. Your brother will have the place I reserved for you. Do you want college?

Yes.”

Ditch Andi Sherman. She’s poor white trash. Members of her family are known criminals. Unless you tell her what she is, forget your plans. Forget any inheritance. Your brother will be near your trysting place and will report to me.

He’d followed his father’s orders. Rob still remembered that evening and the tears in her eyes. He swallowed memories of his failure to face his bullying father.

The young woman turned. She studied the rows of waiting people. Her face blanched.


Tuesday, October 6, 2020

Tuesday's Writer's Tip - Revision - Pacing #BWLAuthor #MFRWAuthor #Revision #Pacing

 There are a number of elements in pacing. One is the pacing for the entire book and the other is pacing within a scene. Pacing for the book depends on the genre you're writing. Most mysteries especially those with suspense in the mix are much faster paced than other story. The pacing of a story in romance can be leisurely or fast, depending on what's happening in the story. The object of pacing is to pull the reader from scene to scene.

The pacing in scenes depends on what type of scene you're writing. The pace of an action scene is usually fast while the pacing on scenes that are mainly descriptive can move at a slower pace. Also the pacing in a scene can depend on the characters. Some characters call for moving slow, others for fast rapid scenes. Scenes with a majority of dialogue tend to be faster paced. So make sure your pacing is on target for a scene.

I belong to a critique group where there are some writers who write beautifully but they tend to bog down the reader in details so the pacing drags. The others like me are so eager to get the story down, they dash ahead and must be told to remember important things.

So when you're doing that final revision, look at the following things. The opening takes forever and is bogged down by putting in things that could be included later in dialogue, either external or internal. Those vital action scenes are either too slow or too fast. Usually the latter seems to be the problem. Look at your balance between showing and telling. Sometimes telling can put a few facts in like bullets where showing could take pages and pages.

So read your stories that final time and make sure the pacing fits what is happening in the scene and the entire book.

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Monday, October 5, 2020

Meandering on Monday with Janet Lane Walters #BWLAuthor #MFRWAuthor #Reading #Writing #Thoughts - the plague strikes

 Meander 1 - Reading - I've been reading Mary Jo Putney's Regency Lost Lord's stories and am enjoying them a lot. I am rereading these books while I'm waiting for new books to capture my interest. I read every day and often reread books I enjoy.


Meander 2 = Thoughts - The Plague Strikes - While there are some people who don't think of this Covid bit as a plague, I know it is. The latest victim is our rpesident and his wife. If this continues, everyone in power in the country will be infected since there are reports of senators, other peopleof interest to become infected. The really simple solution is to wear masks and wash hands. I'm glad I live in an area where 9.5 percent of the people wear masks but there are areas in this county where there are growing clusters of this disease. When will people come to their senses? Perhaps not until there are few left.


Meander 3 - Writing.- Am approaching the end of a draft of Nilos and soon will be on the final rundown and that means careful attention to make sure I have left no loose ends. Have all the facts needed in place and the typos corrected.

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Sunday, October 4, 2020

Sunday's Book - Murder and Bitter Tea #BWLAuthor #MFRWAuthor #Cozy mystery #Hudson Valley #nursing home

Katherine’s newest tenant is estranged from her family and is the granddaughter of one of Katherine’s friends. When her friend falls and fractures her hip, the elderly woman is taken to Hudson House nursing home, an exclusive house.

Katherine’s friend becomes concerned about several recent and unexpected deaths. When she dies Katherine’s curiosity and suspicions send her undercover as a nurse. Soon she’s deeply involved.

Can she learn who is behind the scheme to end the lives of wealthy patients without becoming a victim?

Saturday, October 3, 2020

Saturday's Blurbs featuring Books by Alice Renaud #MFRWAuthor #Paranormal @Mermaids

 


Blurb for Mermaid Marry in Green, a Sea of Love novel – pre order sale $0.99 until 4 October!

Caltha Dooran is the toughest, fiercest shape-shifting mermaid in the western seas. She has three Clans to rule, and no time for romance. But when a warlock, Jonty, turns up and asks her to come with him to London to capture a water monster, she can't say no. In London, away from her duties, her attraction for Jonty grows... and they soon fall under each other's spell. But will his past and her responsibilities pull them apart, or can they find the only true magic, the one that binds two souls together?

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Blurb for Desire Me Again, the new anthology by BVS, which contains the short story The Holiday Mermaid, by Alice Renaud

The hopeless romantic believes that a soulmate exists for each of us. That there is one person who makes us feel how good it is to love them. For some couples, things trigger them to push that love away. They find out too late they’ve lost true-love. Sometimes genuine love deserves a second-chance at the happy ending that eluded them the first time.

Desire Me Again is an eclectic assortment of short stories exploring a second-chance at love. The collection is as diverse as the authors who wrote them. Here’s a chance to read the work of talented writers you may not have read before. Within these pages, there are blends of tender, often moving and thought-provoking stories.

The Holiday Mermaid, a seasonal fantasy romance by Alice Renaud: Adam fell for surfer girl Rowena the second he saw her. But just as their summer fling was becoming serious, she left him without any explanation. Now, with Christmas just a few days away, she’s back… and Adam discovers that she’s a shape-shifting mermaid, from a Clan that hates humans. Can he love her as she is? Can she brave her family to be with Adam for good, not just for Christmas?

 

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Blurb for Music for a Merman, a Sea of Love novel

Rob Regor knew that humans were trouble. All the shape shifting mermen of the Morvann Islands knew it. And human women were double trouble... especially when they were lying on the road in front of a digger.

Rob has a mission. Go to the mainland. Work as a policeman. Spy on humans. Report back to his father, the head of the Regor Merman Clan. It should be easy. Until he has to arrest Charlie. Rob can’t fight his attraction to the sexy eco-warrior, and it puts him on one hell of a collision course with his family and his Clan. Will he break the rules – or break her heart, and his?

Love ‘em and leave ‘em, that was Charlie’s motto. It had served her well until now. But Rob is different… Can she open up her heart to Rob - when a secret buried in her past surfaces and changes her completely?

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Friday, October 2, 2020

Friday Alice Renaud is visiting and Talking about Panster or Plotter #MFRWAuthor #Writing #Panster #Plotter

 

Panster or Plotter

 

Day 1

 

1.      Are you a panster or a plotter or perhaps a bit of both?

 

I start off as a plotter – I plot the beginning, middle and end, then every chapter. Then I start writing, and then my characters sometimes acquire a life of their own, and decide to do things I hadn’t plotted. I’d say I’m a plotter, but my characters are pantsters.

 

2.      Which comes first - characters or plot for you?

 

The characters come first. I usually start with an idea of who the characters are, then the plot derives from them – their history, their strengths and weaknesses, their goals and desires…

 

3.      What are you working on now? Is this a book in a current series or something totally new?

 

With my Sea of Love series now complete, I have started work on the first book in my new series, Conjuring Love, which focuses on time-travelling warlocks and witches. The first book, How to Win a Sea-Witch, is based on my short story “The Sweetest Magic of All,” which is published in the paranormal romance anthology by BVS, “Mystic Desire.”

 

4.      Do you have some kind of object or place that figures in most of your books? I use gems a lot, hospitals and caves.

 

I love that combination! Water features heavily in my books. The Sea of Love series follows the lives and loves of shape shifting mermen and mermaids. Each book is a standalone story centred on a different couple. The first two books are based in Wales, by and in and on the sea. The third book, Mermaids Marry in Green, is based in London, my city, but the river Thames features heavily.

 

5.      Do you write every day or just when the spirit hits?

 

I work full time and have a family, and am often too tired to write in the evening. I aim to write every day at the week end and when on holiday. When it is quieter at work (not the case this year!) I may manage to write a bit in the evening. I write whenever I have the time and energy to write.

 

6.      Where can we find you?

 

Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/AliceRenaudAuthorRomance/

Twitter: https://twitter.com/alicerauthor

Linkedin: https://www.linkedin.com/in/alice-renaud-author-4219b6166/

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Bookbub: https://www.bookbub.com/profile/alice-renaud

Amazon page: https://www.amazon.com/Alice-Renaud/e/B07L52P17B

 

Thursday, October 1, 2020

Thursday's Fifth Scene Murder and Tainted Tea #BWLAuthor #MFRWAuthor #Mystery #Santa Fe #murder

 

I pulled into the carport beside Lars’ silver Mercedes, twin to the car he drives back east. The house seemed larger than my “Painted Lady,” circa 1890. The difference was that mine has two stories and an attic while this house is on one level.

With the kitten carrier in one hand and my purse in the other, I walked to the front door and rang the bell. To my surprise, the door was ajar.

When no one answered, I rang a second time. Where was Lars?

What now? My foot beat an impatient rhythm against the flagstone walk. The kitten cried and scrambled around the carrier making my hold iffy.

I pushed the door open. “Lars, I’m here.”

He didn’t answer. I set the carrier on the slate floor of the foyer. Since the door was open and his car sat in the carport, he was probably in the rear of the house or at one of his children’s. I returned to the car for my suitcases.

I left my luggage in the foyer and stepped into the living room. A portrait of my friend hung above the massive fieldstone fireplace. Several Navaho rugs hung on the cream colored walls.

Through the archway I glanced into the dining room. The table was set for one. The sight of a partially eaten breakfast sent fear surging through my veins.

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“Lars, are you here?” My voice echoed in the deserted room.

What if he’s had some kind of attack? A stroke or his heart.

Those thoughts propelled me through the dining room and into the kitchen. I glanced into the pantry and stepped into the sunroom.

Lars, where are you? Had something dreadful happened? Was my visit responsible for his disappearance?

Don’t be a fool. The world does not revolve around Katherine Miller. He’s at Don’s or Bonnie’s.

Those thoughts failed to staunch my rising panic. Though I felt like an intruder, I made a quick tour of the house. I found three empty bedrooms, a deserted office, two powder rooms and three bathrooms, one for each bedroom. Nowhere was there a sign of my friend.

I returned to the dining room. The food was cold. A fork lay on the oak floor. What had happened here? Lars and I are in our sixties. He’s my senior by six months, but his health has always been excellent.

In the living room, I reached for the phone. Whom could I call? Other than Lars and his children, I knew no one in Santa Fe. I opened the directory. Were their numbers even listed?

My legs trembled. I sank on a chair and glanced through the bay window. Don and his daughter walked across the drive. I went to the door.

Megan, clad in a bright pink puffy jacket, dropped her father’s hand and ran up the walk. “Told you she come.”

Don reached us and hugged me. Warmth infused my thoughts. I believed we’d moved beyond accord.

“Aunt Katherine, you look wonderful.”

The spicy scent of his aftershave was a welcome addition to the sterile air of the deserted house. “You look great and Megan has grown.”

The dark-haired child danced around us. Her blue eyes sparkled with excitement. She pointed to the carrier. “That’s a suitcase for pets. You bring Rose Prairie. Let me see him.”

Momentarily I pushed my concern for Lars aside. No need to upset Megan, especially since she’d lost her mother just eight months ago. “He didn’t come this trip.” I looked at Don. “You may hate me when you see what I’ve done.”

“Never.” He ran his fingers through his hair, a color between blond and brown. “Never hated you. Back then I let my sister run my life.” He closed the door.

I opened the carrier and lifted the kitten. “This is who I brought.”

“Rose Prairie, you shrink.” Megan’s blue eyes widened and she touched the kitten’s brown, white and sable fur. “Him soft.”

“This is Robespierre’s baby sister. Thought you might like to take care of her.”

“Me! Daddy, can I?”

“Yes.” Don met my gaze. “Thanks. This is the most animated she’s been since Ramona...” Sadness clouded his blue eyes.

I grasped his hand. “The kitten will help Megan with her grief. Rose Prairie has had all her shots and you won’t have to worry about offspring.”

“Bless you.”

Wednesday, September 30, 2020

Wednesday Melodic Dreams Moon child Book 2 #MFRWHooks #BWLAuthor #Romance #Music #Occupational therapy

 



Join the authors at #MFRWHooks here http://mfrwbookhooks.blogspot.com  for some great excerpts Mine is from Melodic Dreams Book 2 of the Moonchild series 

BLURB:
When Maria and a child she says is his arrives on Jay’s doorsteps, he is in the middle of composing a musical. Though the four year old has his eyes, Jay can’t be sure this isn’t a scam. He believes his dead wife took steps to rid herself of the child. A need for his assistance to help with childcare while she works is Maria’s reason for arriving in Fern Lake. She also believes her nephew should know his father. Can Jay accept and learn to love his child and deal with the attraction to a woman who physically looks like his dead wife? Can Maria deal with his trust issues and a threat from her own family?




EXCERPT:

 

To the sounds of her nephew banging notes on a xylophone, Maria emptied the last box of kitchenware she’d found at the thrift shop less than a block from the apartment complex. She paused and laughed. She knew that song, the theme from Jeopardy, her mother’s favorite program.

She drew a deep breath. So much to do to make this one bedroom apartment into a home for her four year old nephew. Beds to make, clothes to unpack. She needed to buy curtains to cover the blinds and add color to the ecru walls. She’d been fortunate that the woman from the Human Resources Department at Fern Lake General had found this place.

Last night, she and Jamie had slept on the green carpet in the living room pretending to be camping. This morning the furniture and other purchases from the thrift shop had been delivered.

Jamie finished his rendition with a sweep of the hammer over the keys. She leaned against the counter and loaded their bowls from lunch into the dishwasher.

Maria drew a deep breath. Inside, she quivered with tension she refused to allow to show. She must succeed.

Enough dawdling. There was a man she needed to see. Her gut clenched.

“Jamie, put your toys away. We’re going to see your father.” And pray the man agrees to pay for Jamie’s pre-school while she worked. Two weeks from today, she started at the local hospital as an occupational therapist.

“Will he like me?” Jamie asked.

She hated the worry in the boy’s voice and in his brilliant green eyes. She ruffled his dark curls. “What’s not to like?”

“He never came to see me.”

Maria sucked in a breath. She could have tried to locate the man years ago, but her mother had been adamantly opposed. “He didn’t know about you. Nana didn’t know his last name.” Maria brushed hair from her face. They could have learned. She couldn’t tell Jamie about his grandmother’s anger. Guilt curled in her thoughts.

Jamie looked up. “How did you know?”

“When we were packing to sell Nana’s house, I found some papers in a suitcase your mama left. I saw his name and looked for him.”

Jamie nodded. “Uncle Carlo said my mama runned away ‘cause my dad was mean.” His eyes widened.

She put her fingers on his lips. “What does Uncle Carlo know?”

“Just TV and beer.”

Maria popped toys in her huge bag and walked to the door. They rode the elevator to the semi-enclosed parking area and her battered ten year old blue sedan. She fastened Jamie into his booster seat.

Twenty minutes later with only one wrong turn, she pulled into the U-shaped driveway leading to a huge house at the top of the rise. She rehearsed what she planned to say when she saw Jamie’s father. She swallowed against a lump in her throat. How would he react when she handed him the folder with her reasons for being in Fern Lake?

“Is that the house?” Jamie pointed up the hill. “Looks like a castle.”

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Tuesday, September 29, 2020

Tuesday's Writer's Tip - Revision Completeness #BWLAuthor #MFRWAuthor #Writing #Revision

 One more thing to check when you're doing that final revision of your story is completeness. This is a hard area to be completely sure of. You've read the story so many times and you know the characters almost too well but you need to be sure you haven't left out something. Remember when you're writing a story if there's a gun in the first scene, you need to be sure it's fired or a good reason it's not by the time you finish the book

I remember reading a great book by a friend. In the middle of the book, she mentioned the hero's mother talking to the heroine about wearing men's clothes. She would tell her later why but she never did. I asked my friend why? The book was up for a re-release and this time she answered my questions. We're not all as lucky to have the chance to answer that hanging question for a re-issue of the book. I'm working on a novel right now and I know there are at least two of these items I'll need to address further in the book.

Skipping something the reader needs to know can happen because you know the reason. If the reader has to scratch their head, this isn't good. Just make sure all the clues are there. Not just for mysteries but for every story there are clues to understanding the characters you may know but the reader doesn't. Make sure they're there.

Have you glossed over a major scene and not expanded it so everything is there. This can happen. Sometimes you're in a rush or sometimes the scene makes you feel uncomfortable to write. Don't rush through a major scene and summarize. The reader won't thank you.

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Monday, September 28, 2020

Meandering on Monday with Janet Lane Walters #BWLAuthor #MFRWAuthor #Reading #Writing #Thoughts

 Meander 1 - Reading -I've finished reading F. M. Meredith's Rocky Bluff mysteries and have enjoyed every one of them. I read some of these years ago when we were both members of EPIC and they were on one of my old ereaders. Reading the entire series was fun and I found something interesting. There were many books in the series that I hadn't read. Most of these were in the middle of the series. Not sure what happened. The small town police force stories was fun and the connection between the characters great. Watching the characters change and grow was fun.


Meander 2 - Thoughts -- The first books of many of my series are now priced at $1.49. Hoping this will draw people toward them and I'm hoping to find ways to promote this. It's going to be fun. The Murder and Mint Tea Series, 4 of the fantasy or paranormal series and 3 contemporary series are there. Only one of the series isn't complete but is an ongoing work with five more stories to go.


Meander 3 - Writing -  Am working on the Nilos book and have one draft to finish and one to go. One of the chapters is coming up short but when I get to the final draft, I'll look into seeing what needs to be changed there and hopefully expand the chapter.

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