Friday, October 10, 2014

Friday's Guest - Richard Burns - Talking about Heroes, Heroines and Villains #MFRWauthor


1. Do you write a single genre or do your fingers flow over the keys creating tales in many forms?  Does your reading choices reflect your writing choices? Are there genres you wouldn’t attempt?

Actually, I’m just now starting to expand my horizons, or genres.  My initial jump down the rabbit hole was into the Erotic Romance genre.  That resulted in my first short story, “Sweet Chocolate’s First Taste,” which appeared in Zane’s anthology, “Chocolate Flava 3.”
While I was deployed to Afghanistan on my 2d tour of duty with the Combined Special Operations Task Force-Afghanistan (CJSOTF-A), I wrote a weekly journal to family & friends, which became a fictionalized account of my weekly happenings.  It had to be fictionalized because everything I did was pretty classified.  When  I returned to the states, everybody raved about it.  They all said I had to send it to a publisher, so I did.
This became my Espionage Thriller, “Say Goodnight.” 
Then, on a bet, I thought I’d try my hand at a Horror story, having long been enthralled by Washington Irving’s “the Legend of Sleepy Hollow,” it seemed like a good choice for a current, more recent update of the story line.  Hence, my most recent novella, “Into Darkness Eternal,” launched on September 2.  Although I had my drafted before the Fox TV series, “Sleepy Hollow," mine launched after the series aired.
With that said, however, my story stayed true to the original tale, while the TV series wanders astray almost immediately.  I’ve been told my many people that mine is a very exciting, thrilling tale.
I so liked my characters, Mike Juppe & Maggie Castro that I decided to make a trilogy of the tale, continuing on that Paranormal/Horror Suspense theme.  Like I said, the 1st launched on September 2d and the 2d should be out within a month, and hopefully the 3rd right around Halloween.


2. Heroes, Heroines, Villains. Which are your favorite to write? Does one of these come easy and why?
So far, my heroes & heroines have all been real people that I’ve given a name change.  Most of my villains are to, perhaps morphed a couple into one.  I really have no preference or difficulty in writing either character.  My stuff is actually pretty erotic too, since sex and relationships are such a part of our daily lives, I try to expand on the relationships, a lot! 
Now when I say that, yes,  my stories have their fair share of sex, and it’s pretty steamy.  But sex without romance, is really just that, sex, a simple biological function.  It’s the romance that adds the intensity, the blistering heat, and I want my heroes and heroines, if nothing, to be intense!  Now, I’m not going to waste all that time and effort crafting a nice erotic love scene for a villain, so from that perspective, I suppose it’s more fun to write the hero & heroine Point Of View (POV).

3. Heroes. How do you find them? Do pictures, real life or plain imagination create the man you want every reader to love? Do they come before the plot or after you have the idea for the story?

Typically, they are people that I admire and respect with some decent measure, if I am going to use them in a story.  And I meet these people all of the time!  Come to think of it, sometimes, I don’t even meet them. 
For example, in my book, “Say Goodnight,” everybody I wrote about in that book, was a real person who served with me in Afghanistan.  Now, I did take the liberties of taking people from my first tour (2003), and inserting them into my second tour, but they are all people I admire and respect.  The only character I made up, was my director, Brigadier Ferguson, and because he is the product of my imagination, I kept his part to a minimum.

4. Heroines. How do you find them? Do pictures, real life or imagination create the woman you want the reader to root for? Do they appear before the plot or after you have the idea for the story?

Once, I’m stuck taking the bus to work for a couple of weeks.  I’m standing at the bus stop, a very pretty Hispanic woman walks up and is waiting with me for the bus.  A song is playing on a car radio parked on the street and the volume is pretty loud, so we can easily hear the radio as a Macy Gray song fills the air.
Soon, we are both tapping our feet, slightly bobbing our heads, slightly swaying to the music.  We are certainly friends, nor even acquaintances, and we are certainly not dancing.  But we are sharing in the music of the moment.
As a former Chicago Police Officer, I can see a thousand ways that I can take that moment and craft a story out of it.  I could make the man a Detective who’s car is in the garage, I could make her a body at his next crime scene.  Or, more interesting, I could make her the suspect at the next crime scene!
But the personality that I would give her would have to be that of somebody I know, just so that I could craft a dialog, plan her reactions to given situations.  I could make up an individual, but I don’t think those characters are as stimulating.

5. Villains or villainesses or an antagonist, since they don’t always have to be the bad guy or girl. They can be a person opposed to the hero’s or heroine’s obtaining their goal. How do you choose one? How do you make them human?

In the case of “Say Goodnight,” all I had to do was affix some names to the enemy, Al Qaeda.  Pretty easy, really.
In the instance of my latest, “Into Darkness Eternal,” that was already done for me by Washington Irving, that villain being the Headless Horseman.  Now here, all I had to do was stay true to the original tale, and of course, history.  Which is why you will see on the book cover, contrary to the TV Series, “Sleepy Hollow,” the horseman’s uniform is green, since he was a Hessian cavalryman in the original story, not a British red coat as in the TV show.
My headless horseman is a demonic, spectral killing machine with no human value or content.  I also made his horse a sort of demonic-spectral-villain support mechanism.  I certainly wanted neither villain, nor horse to be sympathetic to the reader.  I wanted the readers to stand and cheer when the good guys got in a hit.

6. What is your latest release? Who is the hero, heroine and or the villain?

As I said above, my latest is “Into Darkness Eternal,” which is a 21st Century addendum to “the Legend of Sleepy Hollow.”  My villain; THE Headless Horseman and my hero and heroine are consistent throughout the trilogy.
Now in the sequel to that story, “Into Darkness Again,” I’ve placed my hero & heroine, Mike & Maggie, into 1780 Tarrytown, New York.  Since Tarrytown is right across the Hudson River from West Point, I thought my characters should be better, made of studier stuff than the typical college couple, who do little more than run through the woods screaming, only to die groveling at the feet of some monster, like in all of the current slasher films.
I decided to make my characters tough, make them a clever pair, of a Combat Veterans, one from Iraq and one from Afghanistan, who were selected from the ranks of the Army to attend West Point.  Then for the sequel, I decided to bring into the story, General Benedict Arnold’s plans to surrender West Point to the British Army during the Revolution.  So, this story became a Paranormal Spy Thriller of the time.  It’s really very exciting, with riveting suspense, if I do say so myself.
I’m told by an objective person that it is a real page turner!  I was meticulous in my timeline and research on this story, so I am pretty sure it is riveting.  However, the villain, Benedict Arnold, actually plays an extremely small part in this story, essentially because the history is already written and I didn’t want to deviate from it too much.
The 3rd installment of the trilogy, “Into Darkness Once More,” was a horse of another color.  In this story, we revert back to a headless horseman (Yes!  That’s right, there is another headless horseman legend in the US), not from the revolution, but from the American Civil War and takes place in West Virginia.  And as we all know, not every story can have a happy ending.  Furthermore, the story takes a couple of drastic turns.  No more to be said on the subject now.

7. What are you working on now?

Right now, since I now find myself back in Afghanistan, it might be a good time to get started on a sequel to “Say Goodnight.”  The Sequel would have to pick up and go through the “Arab Spring,” just to bring me up to today, then bring me back here.
Naturally, I would draft my storyline to fit the day’s current events and happenings.  That’s what’s great about these types of novels, they write themselves!  All I have to do, is insert my characters into the real-life action and excitement, tweak the actual events and what happened, create a romance to add some sexual tension, etc etc.  It’s too easy.  Once I get started, the book practically writes itself!  All I need to do is find time to put it on paper.
And for any aspiring writers out there, that IS the toughest part!  Writers, write.  I’d like to get at least a minimum of two hours, just to get warmed up and allow the story to start flowing.  But that is going to be much harder than you probably think.  If you have kids, or a PAYING Job…  A friend or two, a family member in need…  You get the idea.

8. How can people find you?

Blog
Twitter
Facebook:  I have my own Author’s facebook page, however I also have FB pages for each of my novels/novellas, and they are:

1)       Sweet Chocolate’s First Taste
2)       Say Goodnight
3)       Into Darkness Eterna

SOON TO LAUNCH
4)       Into Darkness Again

5)       Into Darkness Once More

Thursday, October 9, 2014

Thursday's Hero - Rafel from The Amber Tower in The Amber Chronicles by Janet Lane Walters #MFRWauthor #BooksWeLove

Rafel Riva, crown prince of Rivand, felt restless and the only reason he could imagine for his desire to flee the palace lay in the ball to be held that evening.  Four and twenty young women of lineage and wealth had been invited.  The thought of meeting and greeting them chilled him.

He glared at his mother’s back.  His escape from the palace had been delayed while she gushed about the gaggle of girls who would attend.  Each one had been evaluated as to their suitability as a bride.  Her choices had been based on the prestige they would bring to the family.

The queen turned.  “Rafel, you are five and twenty.  ‘Tis time you were wed.  You must choose one for your bride and make her the happiest of women.”

And him the glummest of men.  “Yes, mother.”

“Three princesses are among the most eligible.  The duke’s daughter will also do.  But a princess will bring honor to Rivand.”

His stomach clenched.  Choosing a bride meant there could be just one woman in his life.  A dreary and boring fate.  He liked women, all women.

He hurried along the corridor toward a side door and an escape from the noise and bustle of preparation.  All to celebrate an event he found distasteful.  So engrossed in his plan to escape when a hand clamped his shoulder he reached for his sword.

“Son, I’m glad I caught you.”  The king smiled.  “Have you seen any among the young ladies you would choose as a bride?”

Rafel shook his head.  He had avoided watching the arrivals of the past few days.  “I’ve been busy.”

“I have several suggestions.  The time has come for you to put aside your wild ways and settle into providing heirs for Rivand.”

“Leave your list with my body servant.  Mother left hers.”

The king nodded.  “I will.  Perhaps by comparing the two you will find the perfect candidate.  My list contains those who come from prolific families.  I expect you and your chosen bride to present the kingdom with a son by this time next year.  There’s nothing like a son to drive wildness from a man.”

“Yes, Father.”  Rafel’s hand tightened on the hilt of his sword.  Was there a need for an heir to have an heir?  He had three younger brothers, all in line for the throne.

Rafel watched his father walk away.  Only a few strands of gray touched the king’s dark hair.  His father was a hale man and good for many more years of rule.  As thoughts of twenty or thirty years of being crown prince arose, Rafel groaned.

He reached the exit nearest the stable and slipped outside.  The brother next in line for the throne emerged from behind the hedge.  “Rafe, aren’t you excited?”

“About what?”

“The ball.”

Rafel shrugged.  “Nor particularly.”

“But you might find love with one of the ladies.”

“Or eternal unhappiness.  What is love beyond a trap lauded by the verses of poets?  I have no desire to marry.  If you like you are welcome to them all.”

Peder frowned.  “Everyone says you must marry.”  He scuffed the dirt with the toe of his boot.  “What if you chose the maiden I love?”

Rafel leaned against the palace wall.  “Do you have a choice?”

“I do.  She loves me but her parents are angling for the heir to the throne.  You have all the luck.”

Luck, Rafel thought.  “Hardly.”  Tonight he would meet young women all vying for his attention.  He pushed away from the wall.  “See you at the ball.”

“Where are you going?”

“For a ride.”

“You’d better be back in time.”

Rafel laughed.  “If I’m not, you can take my place.”  He dashed to the stable.

As he saddled his roan gelding he overheard the head groom speaking to another man.  “Tonight the prince chooses a bride.  I’ve placed my money on the princess of Manir.  Who have you picked?”

The other man snorted.  “No choice for me.  One hundred years have passed since the witch took the first crown prince.”

Rafel frowned.  A witch.  How superstitious the lower classes were.  He’d only heard of witches in stories designed to frighten children into obedience.  He led the horse from the stable, mounted and rode through town to the south gate.  As his steed flowed from a walk to a canter he recalled the painting of a man called “The Lost Prince.”  Rumors said the young man had vanished mysteriously.  Rafel wished he could do the same and stay away long enough to miss the ball.

Sunlight filtering through the dense foliage of the summer growth roused him from his reverie.  How long had he been gone?  His stomach growled and he knew he’d missed the midday meal.  He tried to turn the horse but the steed burst into a gallop along the narrow trail.  As suddenly as the urge to return to the palace had arrived, the feeling vanished.  Rafel felt an eagerness to find the trail’s end.

The pounding pace continued.  Rafel loosened his hold on the reins.  Trying to halt the horse seemed impossible.  The trees opened into a clearing.  The steed halted at a picket fence.  Rafel frowned.  He’d never heard of anyone living in the forest.  He studied the scene.  Rose bushes lined the fence and filled the air with their sweet scent.  A path led from the gate through a garden with flowers on one side and a kitchen garden on the other.  The flagstones ended in front of a small weathered cottage.

Who lives here?  Rafel dismounted and walked to the gate.  He paused with his hand on the latch.  

Wouldn’t be polite to wander into someone’s house without an invitation.  A trace of smoke rose from the chimney.  Someone lived here.  “Hello,” he called.

The cottage door opened and someone walked along the path.  As the person neared he saw a woman with hair the color of sunshine and a body with enough curves to intrigue him.  When she reached the gate, he met the gaze of eyes as blue as the summer sky.

“Welcome.”  She opened the gate.

The music of her voice danced along his spine.  “Who are you?”

“Some call me the Witch of the Woods.  I am Emme.  Are you the crown prince of this time?”

His brow furrowed.  What did she mean?  “I am Rafel Riva, crown prince of Rivand.”

She smiled.  He sensed something predatory in her gaze.  He stepped back.

“Enter my garden.”

Her honeyed voice lured him a step or two.  He grasped the gate.  “I wish I could, fair one, but I must return to the palace.”

Her laughter trilled.  “’Tis not to be.  You have been called.  You have a chance to end the curse I placed on the House of Riva.  You look so much like the one who came here before.  Your hair is black and your eyes are the green of summer leaves.”

“What is this curse?”  he asked.

“The first prince I called refused to announce his love for me.  His father, the king, tried to burn my refuge and failed. Every hundred years I will call the crown prince.  He will be given a chance to end what I called on the family.”

“What must I do?”

“Give me your love and marry me.”

Her answer produced a bark of laughter.  “Marriage.  You’ve chosen the wrong prince, my fair witch.  I prefer my single state.”

“That is not the answer I want to hear.”

Rafel studied her.  She was beautiful but so were other women.  “So you cursed my family for a selfish reason.  Just because my ancestor refused to love you.  What happened to him?”

“I don’t know.  He entered the amber globe and vanished.”  She waved her hand and an oval of amber appeared on the grass near his feet.

“Surely there’s another way.”  If she had lived a hundred years how did she remain young?  He rubbed his arms.  She must be a witch.

“The only way is for you to love and marry me.”

He shook his head.  “I can’t.”

“Not even to break the curse.”

Rafel squared his shoulders.  “Not even then.  If I said I loved you that would be a lie.  My mother wants me to marry for prestige and my father for heirs.  You demand love.  I can please none of you.”

She waved her hand.  “So be it.”

The amber globe grew until he was surrounded.  Rafel tried to escape but his blows bounced from the smooth surface.  He closed his eyes.  When he opened them he faced a forest but not the one he’d left for the leaves were touched with the bright colors of autumn.


“Come.”  A soft voice commanded.  “Come.”  The call came again, this time spurring him to run toward the trees.

Wednesday, October 8, 2014

Wednesday's Writer's Tip - On Series - Rooting Out Inconsistencies. #MFRWauthor


Readers who love series can be very critical when an inconsistency occurs. The series can die before the writer is ready to say this is the last story. So how do these inconsistencies creep in. One way is for a lack of planning. Another is that the writer has missed something that was spelled out in another book in the series. Some series are filled with many inconsistencies but they continue. I;m not sure the reason can be found. Let's look at some of the ways they've managed to creep into the string of stories.

Oversights - This means the writer has forgotten something mentioned in one of the prior books in the series. This can be serious or something the reader can look over. My thought if the heroine or one of her friends was a blonde in a prior book and becomes a redhead in the current one, she probably had a reason for changing the color of her hair. But if there's a change in the nameof a major character, there's a problem.

Change Premise - This can throw a series totally off base. There is a search for an evil opponent throughout the books but along comes book 4 and the villain changes, or the writer forgets all about the villain and makes this a totally different kind of story where the villain doesn't even appear.

Technical Problems - This means a development of some technique that didn't exist in an earlier time in the story. Lately I've been updating some old stories about nurses and hospitals but there are no computers and these have to be added in to make them fit into the present level of technology. If a development is missing in the story the writer had better find a way to invent it or if the technical areas make a drastic change from one book in the series there needs to be a reason.

Continuity issues - Having a person be in two places at the same time in a series especially if the reader is a fanatic about the stories. Having a drastic change in the character's age. He was seventeen years older than his youngest brother. His brother is twenty-five in the current story but the main character is only thirty-five. This can be a problem.

Unanswered questions. What this means is that an issue that has been seen in mentions through the entire set of books is never resolved by the writer in the current book. Could be that the writer forgot or that the plug was pulled on the series before it was set to end.

Tuesday, October 7, 2014

Tuesday's Inspiration - Writer, Editor and Revisions #MFRWauthor


The writer receives the response from the editor. The manuscript has been returned with the suggested dreaded revisions. Perhaps the suggestions are minor or they can be major. A little bit of resentment enters the writer's thoughts. How could he or she think that? Is the manuscript really that bad? Probably not. But every writer feels the same way when someone else looks at their story and sees flaws.

Part of the problem lies in the writer. They have been over the story so many times they may see things that aren't there. The editor has found them. Sometimes the problem lies in the editor's view of the story. But the story isn't theirs.

Revisions aren't a lot of fun and yet they can be. The revisions must be made to fit flawlessly into the entire story. It's not just a matter of changing a few words. If the scene needs to be re-written, the writer needs to look at what the editor has said and make changes but the changes must be theirs.

I've read many stories. Sometimes a scene leaps out and doesn't seem to fit the voice, the tone or just something seems wrong. The writer has made the changes following the editor's suggestion and they don't fit something in the writer's style. So when the manuscript comes back from the editor and a part needs to be extensively revised consider what the editor has suggested and then the writer needs to decide how the changes can be made to maintain the story. The story and the vision belong to the writer and the changes must be those he or she find work for them and for the story they have written.

Monday, October 6, 2014

Meandering On Monday with Janet Lane Walters


Meander 1 - When the group goes out of control what does a person do. Critique group last Tuesday was really messy. Not that anyone was being mean or anything like that. It's just everyone was jumping in when they shouldn't have. Interrupting, and other things. Part of the problem was that we weren't at my house. When there I do crack the whip. When the group usually numbers more than 5 or 6 and can approach 14 then it's time. So I posted the rules and hopefully people will stick to them. If not I may need to ask people to leave the group. A hard thing fro me since I'm a Cancer and don't like to throw away old familiar things.

Meander 2 - Had a good book signing on Saturday. There were eight signers so that's a bit too many for an event. Three or maybe four is more ideal. I need to do some pushing to get at least that many of us out into the community.

Meander 3 - Am changing the title of WIP again but I think this one will do the trick. In Pursuit of Michael. The story is going good in this revision stage and I do need to pick up the pace so I can finish it no later than mid-November. Then I also need to get started on looking to finish all those stories I'll be pullonmg from other publishers. Want to put most of my eggs in one basket so things will be easier for my family.

Sunday, October 5, 2014

Sunday - Talking About My Books - Gemstones by Janet Lane Walters #MFRWauthor #BooksWeLove

 Gemstones was written because I enjoy reading Regency era stories. The book was fun to write but in the writing, I learned one thing. Writing them was harder than I could ever imagine. I received some good reviews but I decided I would rather read than write them. The heroine was not raised like the average Regency heroine. She was raised by her father after her mother's death in India. Being curious, she goes about learning to read Sanskrit and reads many writings of India. An ancient sage teaches her and gives her advice. Her father, a gem merchant, dies and the heroine is forced to take her two younger sisters to England into a marriage she doesn't want. She wishes to return to India but her father's partner wants a sapphire he knows her father had procured. He also wants her and she has no desire for him. The most of the story takes place at the estate that was her grandfather's. He has no sons and the earldom goes to a distant relative. A marriage Nicola doesn't want has been arranged. The hero doesn't want the marriage either.

Writing this book, I learned a lot about gems and found this fascinating. I learned a lot about India, the Kuma Sutra and the early Englishmen who went as traders and about the gem trade. I was able to use my experience with Yoga when writing the book and I learned more about Regency England than I will ever use.

Here's the blurb When Nicola Gordon and her younger sisters travel from India to England, she goes to a marriage she doesn’t want.

Drew Barlow has no desire for marriage, but his distant cousin and Nicola’s grandfather, ran the estates into debt. Drew agrees to the marriage for the money and to please the Dowager, Nicola’s grandmother, but he has no trust for women or for love.

When the two meet they clash and come together, igniting a blazing attraction they cannot resist.

The buy link Gemstones  

Saturday, October 4, 2014

Saturday's Blurbs - Books By Sheila Claydon #MFRWauthor #BooksWeLove

The other two books of my When Paths Meet trilogy are stand-alone stories but read together they interweave to become a family saga of loss, love, and reconciliation and, finally, there’s a discovery that sets everyone free.

Mending Jodie’s Heart Book 1
When musician Marcus Lewis buys the derelict farmhouse next to Jodie’ Eriksson's riding school he doesn’t know whether to be amused or irritated by her angry reaction to his plans. Then her sister Izzie visits him and makes things a whole lot worse…or is it better…because now he has an excuse to see Jodie again. Although, when he sees her, it’s not exactly a meeting of minds, they do discover they have one thing in common; they both believe they know what’s best for Izzie, and for Marcus' son Luke.

It turns out they’re wrong. The children they thought they were protecting need to be set free. It’s Jodie and Marcus who have the problem; but can two broken hearts make one whole one? The battle lines that were set when they first met have long since been breached but the war won’t be over until Jodie learns how to trust again, and until Marcus allows himself to believe in his son.

Finding Bella Blue Book 2
International super-stardom is more than Izzie ever expected to achieve so why isn’t she happy?

Jack Corley thought he had escaped his heritage until a family tragedy brought him home to deal with debts, squabbles and a crumbling ancestral home.

Will they find a way to resolve their problems and achieve the peace and happiness they both crave, or will pride and money get in the way?


Kissing Maggie Silver
 http://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B00CS8BO6Q
Maggie Silver intends to put as much space as possible between herself and her family just as soon as her parent’s ruby wedding celebrations are over. She is fed up with their constant advice and her never-ending babysitting duties. There’s a great big world out there and she wants to see it before she settles for suburbia. Then Ruairi O’Connor turns up at the same time her sister-in-law goes into labor, and suddenly everything becomes a lot more complicated.

As for Ruairi, in a few weeks time he will be on the other side of the world, so now is not the time to fall in love, especially with Maggie. Until now he’s thought of her as little more than a child so why has he suddenly discovered she is very grown up indeed and the only thing he wants to do is kiss her.

Reluctant Date
http://amzn.com/B008R39E7C
In a rut, and with her love life at an all time low, Claire Harris makes a New Year’s resolution to join an Internet dating agency. Her challenge is twelve dates or twelve months, whichever comes first, unless she is lucky enough to meet Mister Right along the way. On her final date, and convinced that only frogs are left in the dating pool, she is relieved that it’s nearly over…until she meets enigmatic American, Daniel Marchant. The only problem is, his brother has set him up, and Daniel makes it very clear that he’s not interested in dating anyone at all. He is looking for someone to work in his developing conservation research company though, and when he discovers that Claire has the photographic and cataloguing skills he needs, he offers her a dream job in Florida.

But Dolphin Key is not as idyllic as it seems. There are too many secrets and too much heartache. And Claire has her own secrets as well. Not that she is going to share them with anyone, least of all with Daniel, because he must never know he has stolen her heart.

Cabin Fever
http://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B007H2AJM
The Osprey cruise ship is in trouble. Can Ellie Masters and Andy Smith solve the problem? When they join the ship in New Zealand they soon discover that it’s going to be hard work all the way to Australia. Not that either of them intend to let long hours get in the way of their blossoming love affair...until Ellie develops feet of clay..or is it Andy who is the problem? Is he really who he says he is?

They joined the ship to help the crew, but now it’s Ellie and Andy who need help. Will they get it or is it already too late?

Double Fault

When Kerry Farrow falls for star player Pierce Simon, she doesn’t hesitate when he asks her to join him on the international tennis circuit. She doesn’t care that he isn’t ready to settle down. In her experience happy families are a myth anyway. Then she discovers she’s pregnant and her world falls apart. Unable to turn to Pierce for support, and disowned by her wealthy father, she is on her own.

Two years later Kerry is a single mother of twins. She works hard to keep a roof over their heads and is just about coping until Pierce comes back into her life. When he finds out the children are his, he gives her an ultimatum: either she can marry him or she can fight for her children through the courts.

What she can’t understand is why he wants to marry her. She’s lost her looks and her fortune, so why is he so determined to keep her in his life? It can’t be for love because he already has a beautiful girlfriend, and if he thinks she’s going to become part of a ménage a trios then he’d better think again. She will marry him because she has no choice but she won’t be sharing his bed…except that sharing his bed is the one thing she wants to do.


Friday, October 3, 2014

Friday's Guest Sheila Claydon talking about Heroes, Heroines and Villains

1.    Do you write a single genre or do your fingers flow over the keys creating tales in many forms? Do your reading choices reflect your writing choices? Are there genres you wouldn’t attempt?

I mostly write Romance but I have written an as yet unpublished children’s book, and I’ve also had quite a bit of poetry published. I have an idea for a Romantic Suspense story too (still romance though, so maybe it doesn’t count). If I attempted anything else I think it would be a family saga. I don’t think I would ever attempt adult fantasy or horror.

Although I enjoy reading romances my choice of books is far more eclectic than that. I enjoy many different genres and types of book but only if they are well written. I can’t abide books that turn me into an editor as I try to rewrite them in my head.

2.    Heroes, Heroines, Villains. Which are your favorites to write? Does one of these come easy and why?

Heroes I think, although I don’t know why. Maybe a psychologist would have the answerJ I enjoy choosing my heroines, and sometimes villains are a necessary evil for the plot, but the hero is still my favorite to write despite being the most difficult. Why? Well I guess I fall a little in love with each one as I write about them.

3. Heroes. How do you find them? Do pictures, real life or plain imagination create the man you want every reader to love? Do they come before the plot or after you have the idea for the story?

My heroes always arrive after I’ve had the idea for a story. The heroine comes fully formed at the beginning and then I develop the plot. Only when that is in place to I start to search for the hero. Unlike the heroine, who is usually based on a picture I’ve seen, he is almost entirely a figment of my imagination. I look at who the heroine is and what she needs, and then I find a hero to match.

3.    Heroines. How do you find them? Do pictures, real life or imagination create the woman you want the reader to root for? Do they appear before the plot or after you have the idea for the story?
I’m a very visual person so I can’t start a story until I know exactly how the heroine looks and who she is. This only happens once I’ve ‘seen’ her, maybe in a picture in a magazine, or on TV, or I might even just pass her in the street…but until I can fix a face in my mind, I can’t start writing. Once I have her face, her character begins to develop, and after that it all begins to slot into place.

4.    Villains or villainesses or an antagonist, since they don’t always have to be the bad guy or girl. They can be a person opposed to the hero’s or heroine’s obtaining their goal. How do you choose one? How do you make them human?
Mmm…not so easy to answer. Although I have had a few villains in my books, they usually appear when I need them and develop with the story.  Much more difficult is the ‘inner’ villain in my characters. I mostly write Romance and in my books the hero and/or the heroine are frequently their own worst enemies.  Finding a way past their hang-ups and obstinacy to the happy ending they are searching for is far more challenging than any number of villains.

5.    What is your latest release? Who is the hero, heroine and or the villain?

My latest release is Saving Katy Gray: Book 3 of my When Paths Meet trilogy.  http://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B00MMXVNAO Katy Gray is the heroine and she is used to losing things. By the time the story starts she’s lost her childhood home, her career and reputation, and finally, and most dreadfully, her identity. So when she meets Emlyn Brooks, the hero, she isn’t about to trust him, or anyone else. She just wants a job, so why does she challenge him when he offers her one without the courtesy of a proper interview?  And later, why won’t she believe him when he tells her that the blonde, beautiful and spiteful Lucy is of absolutely not importance.



6.    What are you working on now?
A difficult question because I have a children’s book I want to re-write, another Romance that I’m about one third of the way through, and a third book that is still a host of shadowy characters in my head. I don’t usually have 3 books on the go at once and I know I’ll have to prioritize, and that it will probably be the partially written Romance, which is set in London and Florence, and is about a failing jewelry empire.

8. How can people find you?
            Website
            Blog
            Twitter
            Facebook


Thursday, October 2, 2014

Thursday's Hero - Stephen from The Amber Dragon #MFRWauthor #BooksWeLove

The solstice full moon had just touched the horizon, Stephen Riva, crown prince of Rivand, stared at the Witch of the Woods.  With her hair the color of spun amber and eyes the brilliant blue of summer skies, her beauty fascinated him.  The words she spoke made him uneasy.  He frowned and turned toward his father.  The king glared at the woman.
The witch pointed a finger at the king.  “You have not won.  Fire will not destroy the garden or drive me from the home I have created.”  She spun and waved her hands.  All traces of the fire set by the king and his men vanished.  She grasped Stephen’s hand and pulled him into the garden.  “Confess your love for me.”
He shook his head.  “How can you speak of love?  Love does not strike in an instant and set a heart on fire.  Love grows like a flower from a seed, planted and carefully tended.”
A dreamy expression appeared on her lovely face.  “The moment I beheld you I knew you were mine.  Your dark hair, your handsome face and your muscular body have enchanted me.  I could drown in your moss green eyes.”
Stephen shook his head.  In all his twenty and one years he had never heard such nonsense.  “You will not have me.  I have a duty to Rivand, the land I will one day rule.”
“Do you have brothers?”
“Yes.”
“Then one of them can take on your duty to the land.  You have no reason to reject me.”
Stephen shook his head.  “There are three reasons.  Duty, honor and love.  My duty as crown prince of Rivand is to take the throne.  Should I run away from doing this I would lose honor?  I do not love you. Those are my reasons to reject you.”      
Her eyes narrowed.  “So be it.  If you will not be mine you will not be Rivand’s king.  A curse I lay upon the House of Riva.  Every hundred years a prince will be given a chance.  To give his heart to me or be taken into the amber orb and spend his life on another world.”
Stephen looked at her.  “I pray one day you will learn love does not happen in an instant and cannot be given on command.”
She smiled.  “And you may learn love can occur in an instant and become eternal.”
Though there were no clouds, thunder rumbled.  A streak of lightning flashed across the sky and struck the ground near Stephen’s feet.  He saw the sparks coalesce into a sphere imprisoning him behind the walls.  Stephen stretched his arms toward his father and the Witch of the Woods.  The walls of the orb were too distant to touch.  He turned and stared at a mass of trees.
The rustling leaves became voices urging him to walk.  His strides lengthened until he ran.  Was this a dream?  The branches of the trees scratched his face and arms.  He groaned.  Truly he had been brought to another place.
Stephen had no idea how long he walked.  The clusters of trees thinned.  Beyond them he saw a road and some distant buildings.  Before stepping onto the hard-packed earth he removed his coronet, his sword and most of his jewelry.  As a stranger in an unknown land he dare not appear hostile.  He wrapped his possessions in his cloak and hid them in a hollow tree.  With his boot knife he marked the spot.  Then he stepped onto the road and sought his new destiny.

* * *

Princess Valia stared at the seventeenth prince who had come to Lanton to court her.  Since the day her father had decreed she must marry, every available prince from the neighboring kingdoms had arrived at the palace.  This young man was her last possible choice for a spouse. She didn’t want him. She’d dreamed of marriage and had yearned for a man who would adore her. A man who made her heart flutter in her chest. Each one who had arrived had the qualities presented by this final candidate.
He was handsome.  The way he preened like a peacock meant he knew about his looks.  He acted as though his willingness to wed her was a gift and her acceptance a given.
Valia scowled.  How dare he think she had no choice?  How dare he 

Wednesday, October 1, 2014

Wednesday's Writer's Tip - Series and Consistency #MFRWauthor


When I was reading Writing The Fiction Series by Karen Wiesner she mentioned consistency when writing series. My first thought was what exactly did this mean and wasn't this the same as continuity? Suddenly I realized though they seemed the same there was a slight difference. I've read a lot of series and have suddenly stopped reading one or more series and I wasn't sure why. These series had many of the qualities needed to establish them as a series.

I remember one that was a romance series and suddenly the author wrote a story that was a lot different from the other stories. There was no romance. There were elements contained in the story that fit the series but the lack of the romance made me stop reading that series. The series had lost that consistence. Yes, there were similarities. They still took place in the world the writer had established. There were familiar places, even a character or two were the same as in the other books but there was a missing element. There were no characters seeking a happy ending.

I'm reading another series that has I believe 13 books and probably more to come. These books are consistent. Though the characters grow and change most of them are present in each of the stories. The world is the same most of the time. When the world changes there are reasons for the change that make sense in the consistency of the story. The changes in the world are held together by the characters who remain the same as in the other story are ones who have been in the other books. The pattern of the stories remain the same.

I'm not talking about the kind of pattern where something that happens on page 50 of one story are the same in every book. This isn't the consistency That I'm looking for. There are series written where the same action occurs in Chapter 3 or Chapter 7 in every book in the story. This pattern becomes one the reader sees as a habit and though it seems consistent it becomes boring. So when you're writing your series, you need to remember the small details that make for consistency.