Monday, July 26, 2010

My Writing Life - Last week's wonderful news

Yje week began with a review of The Dragons of Fyre by Bitten By Books ad garnered a 4. Here's a snipped from the review.

The world and characters of The Dragon of Fyre are outstanding. I particularly liked the fact that the absolute hero of the story was a dragon and not the humans. He was not only the keeper of dragon wisdom but also the mentor and healer of Drakon. The story is vibrant, and the characters are portrayed as people doing the best they can and persevering in horrendous conditions. The author led the characters and reader along beautifully on the journey of healing and love.

Then came the review for Flight, another 4. Here's a snippet.

Flight by Janet Lane Walters
Publisher: Mundania Press
Genre: Action/Adventure, Sci-Fi/Fantasy
Age Recommendation: 12+
Length: Full Length (233 pgs)
Rating: 4 Suns
Reviewed by Aloe

"We’ve been betrayed." Those words spoken by the Dom and Doma of the Wesren henge awaken their four children—two sets of male-female twins.

Each child has an affinity for one of the four elements—earth, air, fire and earth. In secret, the young teens flee their home to seek a place of safety and teachers to hone their control. They use their emerging talents in ways they never imagined.

Will their quest succeed or will they become pawns of He Who Walks In Darkness?
Would you like to have an affinity that is magical and gives you powers? What if you aren’t sure how to use or what to do with it?

This is the story of two sets of twins that have such a talent. The oldest twins are just celebrating their 14th name day when disaster hits. Soldiers are at the gate and a rival Dom is ready to take over their henge (a castle-like structure).

Ash is the oldest and is given responsibility for her twin and two younger siblings. They are guided into a secret tunnel and sent out into the woods and on to a neighboring community named Cedris. Their parents remain behind.

What intrigued me about this story was that it included two sets of twins and magic. They are young and just beginning to understand what their abilities are, but they don’t have full control of their magic yet. And then the world they know falls apart…

The author does a good job of expressing their loneliness, fear and insecurities in the traveling they have to do and the new life they must begin. The siblings all have their strengths and weaknesses. The youngest girl is very impetuous and impulsive. There is squabbling between the siblings as well as very nasty dangers facing the group. There is good and evil in the world they live in, and they are caught in the middle with no guidance on how to proceed. The characters are resourceful, full of spirit and resilient. They also make a few mistakes along the way, which makes them seem more human.

This is a fast-paced, well-written story that grips you and carries you along, wanting to see what is going to happen next. The world this author created has richness and poverty, enslaves and tortures children and adults, and rival groups seeking power. You can feel the children’s terror, admire their ability to find food and survive, and you know they can’t trust anyone they meet.

The book indicates this is the first novel in a series, and two more are planned. I’m glad. This was an entertaining read and has just enough danger and imagination to keep your attention. I’m looking forward to seeing how the twins conquer their problems.
The last great thing is getting a pub date for The Warriors of Bast and also the great thing my new publisher did for me. You can see it here including the book cover and a chance to read an excerpt/

What my new publisher has done. Check here to see the cover and to read an excerpt.

I'm pleased to offer my book The Warrior of Bast for a free preview here -

Please read it and share the same with your other friends.

I'd love to hear your feedback on my book.

1 comment:

Malcolm R. Campbell said...

Reviews like those help make the long hours of work worthwhile.