Thursday, June 3, 2010

Writing Tip Pacing

Just what is pacing. I've thought about this a lot ever since a writer friend told others that my book Obsessions showed a mastery of pacing. Now this is a medical suspense so pacing was an interesting effort. Pacing has to do with the flow of a story. If you've ever read a book when you wanted the writer to speed up or to slow down, either condition is part of pacing.

Pacing can be tricky. When doing an acion scene, short sentences are better than long ones. Keeping the description tight can help a scene flow faster. One thing is not to keep up the rapid fire writing for too long or your reader amy be out of breath.

Long sentences full of phrases and clauses slow the pace. This gives a reader time to savor the story but continued for too long, this can make the reader want to fall asleep.

Pacing in ensemble stories can be useful. I do a lot of these and some that are essentially two view point characters. Even switching from one character to another can slow or speed up the pace according to the intent of a scene.

Pacing is also a devise that can pull a reader to turn the page. Ending on a note that causes curiosity can pull a reader to the next chapter.

4 comments:

Jennifer Probst said...

Thanks for the tips, Janet. It is always nice to remind ourselves to check the pacing in our editing process.

Liz said...

I think pacing is one of the most difficult to master. Though I find I'm pretty good at chapter endings.

Terri said...

Sometimes its just so hard to keep up the level of urgency that makes the reader want to turn the page and turn and turn and turn...
Maybe that's more of a conflict building than pacing thing, though.

Wendy Marcus said...

I like to read fast paced books. I'm one of those readers who sometimes skips the description and backstory to get to the action. When I write, I really have to be careful to add in enough description and backstory!