Showing posts with label Checklist. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Checklist. Show all posts

Tuesday, August 13, 2019

Tuesday's Writer's Tip -Checklist for Using Mood to Perk Up your story Janet Lane Walthers #MFRWAuthor #BWLAuthor #Zumaya #Mood

Check lists are always fun at least for me. So when I'm doing a final revision of my stories, I sit and check what I've done.  Though I cann this draft Words, it's more a general sense of what I've hoped to accomplish with my words.

Have I chosen a proper form. My books generally fall into the comedy form. There may be some elements of tragedy but these do not overwhelm the story. I'm not really a melodrama kind of writer. My characters are more average than those who seem to be epic characters. I envy writers who can create larger than normal characters.

Then I read for atmosphere. My books tend to be light but I have some that tend more to darkness. I try to find ways to turn what could be dark and tragic into something that's brighter, especially since many of my stories have medicine at the base.

Emotional tone is hard and sometimes means re-writing a scene or two to make sure I'm stirring the emotion I want the reader to experience. I try to use humor in some scened to make people laugh. I remember once reading a short story to my critique group and had us all laughing to hard I could barely finish. This was one time when I knew the emotional tone was on target.

The final thing I look at is the masculine or feminine focus of the scene. I often have to look at this very hard. When using a male point of view in a scene, I need to look at the way men act and react. The same goes for a female slanted scene.


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Tuesday, February 19, 2019

Tuesday;s Writer's Tip Checklist for Plot #MFRWauthor #BWLPublishingLTD #Plot #Checking

When you're finding those bugs or slips in your plot and need a quick repair or a lengthy one, Here are some things to remember.

1. Your plot line. Man against man, Man against nature or man against himself. Oneof these should be the major theme underlining your story.

2. The six elements.- Wo, what, when, where, why and how. Is each one developed to the max?

3. The nine areas should be examined, Framework, motivations, significant events, the vital idea, the action, the reactions, the goals, the sub-plots, the conflicts both the internal and the external.

Acrually, you could plan your next book while keeping all these in mind.

Tuesday, November 20, 2018

Tuesday's Writer's Tip - Checklist for Using the Senses #MFRWAuthor #BWLPublishing #Senses

You've finished your manuscript and are set about revising the story. Make sure you've used the senses in ways that help the reader enter the story. Here's a checklist to follow. After doing this many times, you'll find it comes with ease. I've been judging for a contest lately and I've found the main thing wrone is the senses aren't used effectively. After the writers use sight to describe a person physically, they may use sound but that's generally in dialogue or in rather mundane ways.

1. Have you used all the senses - sight, sound, taste, touch, smell?

2. Have you used them in both internal and external dialogue? And in narrative passages?

3. Have you used them to develop character, advance the plot and give information?

4. Are they used to show setting? Characters, time frame and tone or mood?

Take your stories paragraph by paragraph and see if using the senses can enhance the story.

Tuesday, July 3, 2018

Tuesday's Writer's Tip - Check List for Dialogue #MFRWAuthor #BWL Publishing #Dialogue #Checklist


A lot has been said about Dialogue. Don't expect to get it right during the first draft. I know I don't. First or Rough Drafts for me are getting the story down and I often found there are many problems with the dialogue. Not so many as there were when I began writing. I have a checklist of things I do when I'm in the revision stages of a manuscript.

!. Check each character's words forindividuality. Do they sound different from every other speaker?

2.Check each speech for emotional impact. Is the way someone says something have an impact on the reader and is it the one you want?

3. Make sure the characters words are in character. Do they show his social status, his education, his age and all the other things that make up his character?

4.Check the tag lines. Get rid of adverbs. Find ways to use action to identify the speaker.

5.Ask your self these questions. Does the dialogue help bring the character to life? Does the dialogue give the information a reader needs? And does the dialogue advance the plot? Is this bit of dialogue necessary or is it a throwaway? Does the internal dialogue serve the purpose you intend?



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