Labor's contractions wrack my soul.
The blow of pain is pulsing,
Roaring, filling me with fear.
And yet it will not stop.
I need a midwife to aid the birth
But there is no one to hear.
I must bear down
And birth myself
To still my cries of pain.
Meander 2 _ Reviews - Writing them is what this is about. I seldom write long ones. Just stating if I liked the book and maybe a bit about the characters or the plot. To me many reviews are too long. At one time I write reviews for several sites and they had to be at least one paragraph and preferable more. I also have a problem writing a review. If I can't be favorable and maybe have only one nit to pick that's fine. I recently read a book. The beginning was great. The ending was great. But the middle - the writer got on a soapbox and bored me to tears. The nit I found was too big for me to write this review. Sad since the writer had some good movement at the start and at the end. I kept think move this story alone. I don't need sermons. So I won't write the review.
Meander 3 - Writing. Am coming to the end of the plot draft and the time is coming to turn this book into a great story. We'll see but I keep slogging along.
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