Saturday, March 18, 2017

Saturday's Blurbs - featuring Books by Darrell Bain #MFRWauthor #Science fiction #aliens

BLURB FOR GALACTIC FRONTIERS

A new novel by award-winning author Darrell Bain. The spiral arm is being colonized. One group of humans is attempting to reestablish the values of the old United States among the stars. They are forming a confederacy of worlds beyond the reach of the oppressive UN government on earth. Sage Cortez believes he is on a simple colony ship, but as it gets farther and farther from earth more and more obstacles are put in its path. These include pirates, UN led assaults, alluring UNBI agents intent on subverting his loyalty and even intrigue among the crew. Added to all this is another alien race lying in wait who want to claim the spiral arm for themselves and a wholly inimical race facing the aliens. When Sage set off to be a colonist with his parents and siblings, he didn't realize what heavy responsibilities which would be thrust upon him along the way.


BLURB FOR SPACE TRAILS:

Darrell Bain’s novel encompasses the spirit of the old American pioneers who risked all for a chance of a better life in a new environment. With conditions in America deteriorating, the Bentley family decides to take advantage of the recently discovered method for reaching the stars. They sign a contract with a corporation in return for partial financing of their venture to a new world. But as they travel on the space trails, they gradually discover that all is not right about the expedition they’re on. When the discrepancies finally come to a head, they find the corporation has deceived all the immigrants. Regardless, there is no turning back, for the leaders of the expedition have outsmarted themselves. Out of food, lost in the labyrinth of the space trails, beset by denizens of the ‘ways, with only a slim chance of survival, the Bentley family and their fellow immigrants press on, driven by the same indomitable spirit their forebears showed while conquering a new continent.


BLURB FOR SAMANTHA’S TALENT


Samantha Douglas has been able to talk to animals as far back as she can remember. The problem is that no one believes her. Her talent gets young Samantha in trouble time after time as she grows from a young girl into a teenager, forcing her parents to move again and again while Samantha only wants to be herself. Instead, after leading a runaway tiger back to the zoo she becomes a celebrity. Some think she’s a fake. Some worship her. Some hate her. Muslin Jihadists try to kidnap her and a rogue government agency wants to use her. Her talent can give the United States a huge jump over other nations but first she has to stay alive, second she must solve a decades-old, other-worldly enigma and last she has to convince everyone she is truly capable of all the demands being made on her. A novel that Adults, Young Adults and anyone else will find fascinating.

Friday, March 17, 2017

Friday's Guest - Darrell Bain - Who He Was Before #MFRWauthor

1. What were you in your life before you became a writer? Did this influence your writing?

I spent 4 years in the Air Force and  7 years in the army, including two years in Vietnam. All my military time and 17 years following, I was in the medical field. Apparently I was fairly good at what I did. Began as a Surgery tech and Delivery room and Delivery ward. Assisted Surgeon (we only had one general surgeon at the time so got a lot of experience in suturing wounds, clamping bleeders and holding retractors during difficult cases until it felt as if my arm and hands would fall off. Assisted in delivery room wherever needed, including delivering twins one night when the doctor couldn't be found and the nurses panicked. I just started giving orders and got the twins out, cut the cords, calmed the mother, kept the nurses busy so they had something to do other than scream, "Where's the blanket blank doctor?"
After this I went to the Emergency room where I learned about drugs and treatment, did lots more suturing and caring for wounds. Then to a ward that needed help.
In the army, was first a pharmacist, took six months starting from zero, studying on my own and passed the test for Pharmacy specialist, filling all RXs except narcotics. Pharmacy was boring after I learned it so reenlisted for Basic Lab school. Graduated first in class.
Then the army sent me to college, all expenses paid, but as a 9th grade drop out I lacked the math background, had family problems and only went a year. Then I was a company clerk while waiting reassignment. Went to Evac hospital and spent time when not in lab as medic on duty for training by men. I went with them  to Ranger School and other schools. Also went to a school myself on CBR Warfare and graduated first in class. Then applied for advanced lab school and graduated first in my class. Then to Vietnam for first year there. Had a small, ill-equipped lab that got red dust over everything whenever a chopper landed. Soon was running the whole Dispensary team in addition to lab. Another sergeant and I "appropriated" a ton of outdated medicine (which had a built in safety factor of several years) and began our own private MEDCAP missions, going out to villages and treating the sick, lame and lazy, probably including a fair number of Viet Cong. We were ordered to stop after the VC blew up one of the Village Chiefs where we had been treating his people.Came back to the States long enough to get another promotion and back to Vietnam again. Was Hancho of Lab for large Field hospital, then transferred to the northern part of the country when my brother, an F-4 pilot, arrived. WE managed to spend a few days together several times, enough for us to get into trouble by partying too much and me impersonating an officer. Finally went home.and got out, only 7 years short of retirement. All these experiences are described in one of my first books, Medics Wild.
After leaving the army, I went to college and by dint of heavy memorization managed to obtain a degree in Medical Technology. Almost immediately after graduation, I began a series of managing labs in Louisiana and East Texas. At one of these labs, I met my future wife, kissed her under some mistletoe ( a contrived meeting) and we were married a year later. Continued moving around to manage labs, but always got bored once it was running smoothly. Betty and I went to Saudi Arabia where she worked as a nurse and I was a Chief Tech of the lab. Then promoted to Assistant Hospital Administrator.(another boring job) but paid well. We took several vacations that Betty described beautifully in her one published book,

Great Diet Busting Dessert Recipes: Along with Wonderful Articles on Humor, Medicine and Travel

  Betty couldn't stand the way women (including her) were treated and after a year of that we broke our contract, paid our own way home and paid for shipping our household goods. Luckily we had saved a good bit of money but when we sorted things out we didn't have much left.
I  continued work in the medical field for a few more years, THEN CAME aids AND I decided to go into farming Christmas trees. Betty and I did this for a number of years, described in  three of my books, DOGGIE BISCUIT, LIFE ON SANTA CLAUS LANE, and  LAUGHING ALL THE WAY. These are all humorous books. As I farmed, I also became a house husband and learned to cook after a fashion. Betty described my cooking as "Innovative". I've always been scared to ask what she meant.
FArming gave me time to write. I had always enjoyed it but now needed to make some money and got serious about it. Soon I gave up farming and began writing full time.


2 Are you genre specific or general? Why? I don't mean genres like romance, mystery, fantasy etc. There are many subgenres of the above.

If I am genre specific at all it would be Science Fiction, but my adventure novels, such as the series of The Adventures of The Williard Brothers, a lot of the adventures are actually true. Medics Wild served as sort of a preque3l but the series begins with: POSTWAR DINOSAUR BLUES, BIGFOOT CRAZY, THE BILLION DOLLAR CARIBBEAN CAPER AND SPACE FOR SALE. The last two are in the re-edit phase but the first two are available at all the on-line book stores.

3. Did your reading choices have anything to do with your choice of a genre or genres?

Heinlein definitely influenced my science fiction. I don't know where the humor books came from other than maybe remembering some humor books I've read. I wote one romance at my Mother's urging, HOTLINE TO HEAVEN. Parts of it were humorous and the beginning involved The Salvation Army. I was surprised when I heard from an official asking if I would donate a copy of HOTLINE TO HEAVEN to the Salvation Army Museum. Of course I complied. Most of my books involve adventures of various sort in the framework of SF or Thrillers.
I have written a few non-fiction, including my Autobiography (out of print now, but used copies available). I may re-write it and get it back in circulation.

4. What's your latest release?

My latest release just came out, THE NEW TYPES, A science Fiction adventure that includes some medical issues and a number if small firefights. The Title reads: THE NEW TYPES. THEY'RE HERE. THEY'RE .DIFFERENT and boy, are they!!!

5. What are you working on now?

I'm busy re-editing a lot of books from when I split the blanket with one of my main publishers. I was also near-incapacitated for 8 or 9 months last year, due to back problems that eventually resulted in surgery and then a freak accident that caused a bad burn on my back about  months ago and still isn't completely healed, although it doesn't hamper my work.

6. Where can we find you?

 At www.darrellbain.com and also at Facebook, Twitter and I can be reached  from my web site.  Just X out the OUtlook window that gets in the way. I'll have that fixed soon.
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Thursday, March 16, 2017

Thursday's Second Scene - Gemstones #MFRWauthor #Historical romance #Gems

Drew Barlow, Earl of Denmere, slouched on the brocade sofa and crossed his legs at the ankles. His highly polished Hessians gleamed in the light from the fire. He stared at the flames that danced and sent sparks flying up the chimney.
"What does an impoverished earl do?" He addressed his question to the portrait above the chimney piece. To restore the estates pillaged by his predecessor, marriage to an heiress with a considerable fortune and probably a father in trade was essential. While some members of the ton would look askance at his choice, his family had created enough scandals to make the taint of trade a mere blemish.
He groaned. His mother’s passionate nature, his father’s drunken behavior, the late earl’s obsession with gaming. All played a part in his need to wed and his antipathy toward marriage.
A log fell and sent a rain of sparks flying. The Dowager Countess of Denmere was the only woman he respected. His need to marry money was as much for her as for the estates and to pay the debts left by his distant cousin.
Aldora had rescued him from a drunk and abusive father. She had seen to his education, and thought not related to him other than by marriage, had treated him like a son. She deserved the comforts he couldn’t afford to give her.
The library door opened to reveal his host. Drew’s London house had been rented, and for the past two weeks, he’d been a guest in his friend’s Mayfair townhouse.
Tristan Atwell, Duke of Cairnton, strode into the room. Only a white shirt relieved the stark black of his riding clothes. He held a crop in one hand and leaned against the Adam’s mantelpiece to study Drew. "Town is a bit thin of company these days."
Drew nodded. "I should have come in March but I had a dozen problems to untangle."
"I have the acquaintance of a wealthy widow who would favor an earl as a second husband. Would you like me to arrange an introduction?"
Drew shook his head. "A widow is used to controlling her own fortune and bestows her favors where she will."
Tristan lifted a crystal decanter and filled a glass with port. "A loan? My pockets are deep."
Drew considered the essential purchases needed to put the estates in working order and shook his head. "They’re not bottomless. I didn’t come to town to drag you into my financial problems."
"Let me have your cattle. A team of grays might lighten my reputation."
"And ruin your image." Drew chuckled. "Why not one of whites?"
Tristan shrugged, "You make being a friend difficult."
Drew looked up. Would Tristan, who always had blunt to spare, understand the need to pull himself from the River Tick? With an infusion of a goodly sum, the farms and herds would bring a profit. "Tattersall’s will do the honors. Having me as your guest is enough."
Tristan shook his head. "Anyone who contemplates marriage is either a fool or desperate."
"I plead guilty to both conditions." Tristan’s raised eyebrow and sardonic expression made Drew laugh. "I do what I must. What do you hear from Michael and Niall?"
"From Niall, nothing."
"I’m sure he’s in the thick of action. He was always one to love a fight. And Michael?"
Tristan’s stance relaxed. "He’s awaiting the birth of his heir or heiress. Never thought he’d be the first caught in the parson’s mousetrap." He turned from the window. "What say you join me for an evening at Eugenie’s? Her charming cousin, the fair Janine, frequently asks about you."
"Another time." Drew followed his friend to the door.
While women looked on him with favor, he seldom accepted their invitations to dally. To surrender was to flirt with the loss of control, something he couldn’t afford. Too often, he’d seen what happened to a man who gave in to his passions.
A footman approached. "Your Grace, a message for the Earl has arrived. His man’s in the kitchen and awaits an answer."
Drew accepted the note. As he read the contents, he frowned.
"Bad news?"
"She wants me to come home. She has received a letter concerning something I must attend to at once."
"Another demand for money from some tradesman?"

Drew’s casual shrug belied a deep sense of frustration that threatened to drag him to the depths. In the year since his distant cousin’s death, there had been many such demands. "The note is vague and so unlike her. I fear the news has overset her. I’ll leave at once."

Wednesday, March 15, 2017

Wednesday's Writer's Tip - Writing ABC - X is for the X Factor

I had a hard time coming up with an X for writing. I decided on the X factor and this can mean a number of things. In writing this is something that can't be defined until all of a sudden there is is to add perhaps body to the plot. The X factor can be some secret the hero, heroine or villain is holding to their chest and is afraid to reveal.  This secret can be a bombshell or it can be something that is not so bad but when revealed makes the character's actions make sense.

Tuesday, March 14, 2017

Tuesday - The Writer's Life - Snarled Middles #MFRWauthor #writing #Middles


The middle of a book is where all the action happens. The characters are on stage and their desires are known as well as the stumbling blocks in their path. The writer has reached the middle. Here is where all the problems that need to be solves happen. Each problem leads the reader a step or two further toward the end.

There are scenes that follow, each looking at a step toward that goal. There are complications occurring that pull the characters forward and backward. Sometimes the complications become too complicated. The middle becomes snarled.

How does one unsnarl the mess the manuscript has become. The solution takes work. Finding an end and removing the knots that have formed. Find another strand. Sometimes this means cutting one of these strands and removing it from the story.

Do you  have too many villains? Find a way to combine them into one big villain. Villains can have more than one goal and can effect one or more of the characters.

Is the hero or heroine too weak? Is one of them strong and the other weak? Making them equal is the solution to this problem.

Are your characters dashing all over the world, the country, the town. Cut down on the number of settings and make each one important to one of the characters.

As you've looked at the snarled middle and have undone some of the threads, suddenly the story is heading in the right way so that the writer can see the end.

Monday, March 13, 2017

Meandering On Monday with Janet Lane Walters #MFRWauthor #Poem #Where is Spring #Writing

Meander 1 - Tiger Cat 3

I walk on padded feet,
Softly slipping through the grass,Stalking all that moves or crawls.
And when my instincts are satisfied,
I lay in the sun
To survey the ones I own.

Meander 2 - Where is Spring? The days should be becoming warmer. Spring is officially a few days away. So why are the days becoming more bitterly cold. They're also talking about a violent snow storm coming. I am tired of winter. I dislike being fooled when I look outside and see brilliant sun. I am waiting for Spring.

Meander 3 _ Writing. I will finish the Cancer - Capricorn Connection and mail it off by Monday. Then I must finish typing the revisions of Past Betrayals - Past Loves. I can't wait to start fixing all the other books of mine for Books We Love. Then I can start a new story and also the 10 books I've recieved the rights back for. Great time.

Sunday, March 12, 2017

Sunday's Book - Gemstones #MFRWauthor #Regency #Romance

Gemstones






When Nicola Gordon and her younger sisters travel from India to England, she goes to a marriage she doesn’t want.

Drew Barlow has no desire for marriage, but his distant cousin and Nicola’s grandfather, ran the estates into debt. Drew agrees to the marriage for the money and to please the Dowager, Nicola’s grandmother, but he has no trust for women or for love.

When the two meet they clash and come together, igniting a blazing attraction they cannot resist.

Reviews:
Janet Lane Walter's latest book Gemstones is a stunning tale of the differences between two cultures, English and Indian, and what occurs when two different cultures clash. After the death of her father, eldest daughter Nicola Gordon must take charge of her family, fifteen-year-old Elizabeth, a budding flirt, and ten year old Margaret, a hoyden of the worst degree.



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Saturday, March 11, 2017

Saturday's Blurbs - featuring Books by Krissie Fortune #MFRWauthor #contemporaryromance #military


Send the blurbs for three of your books.
This is my Heroes of Westhopre Ridge trilogy.

Abigail Montgomery, a small town schoolteacher with zero self-confidence, dreams of the Dickensian Christmas her family never enjoyed. Each month she attends a masked BDSM club, but her next visit will be her last. If she doesn’t marry within the next year, her brother won’t inherit Montgomery Hall. Desperate, she advertises for a husband.

Jared Armstrong, a former Marine sharpshooter and occasional Dom needs to $125,000 to get his family out of a hole. His solution—to marry Abigail Montgomery for her money. His only regret is his wife won’t accept his spanking lifestyle.

Gradually, Abigail comes to dream of making their marriage real, but she promised Jared a divorce two years after their wedding. Can they share some Christmas magic as their relationship faces extortion threats, a kidnapping, and an attempted murder? Or will Jared break her heart when he walks away?


Jasmine Stewart (Jazz to her friends) falls for the blond stranger when he spanks and seduces her at a Washington soiree. Later, when she discovers her flatmate is trying to draw her into a spy ring, she goes to the authorities. The ensuing publicity costs her her job, her security, and her future. Starting over in Westhorpe Ridge is her only option.

Sean Mathews, former SEAL and Westhorpe Ridge’s sheriff, can’t forget the woman he spanked when he visited Washington, but he thinks she’s a spy. When she turns up in Westhorpe Ridge, he tries everything to make her leave town. Despite their misunderstandings, though, they can’t keep their hands off each other.

As Year’s Eve looms, the spy ring resurfaces. Jazz will need all of Sean’s SEAL prowess to survive. But because his wounded leg cost him his speed in the water, will it be enough?



Twelve years ago, Mandy Devlin moved away from her friends and family--under threat. If she returned in the next ten years or told anyone who fathered her baby, her boyfriend’s great-aunt would bankrupt her family. She’s a single mom who dreams of her lost love and a good spanking. When she’s finally free to return to Westhorpe Ridge, the last person she expects to see is Adam--the man she loved and lost so long ago. 

Dr. Adam Montgomery doesn’t know he has a son. Thanks to his great-aunt’s will, he has nine months to find a bride or he loses Montgomery Hall and the fifteen million dollars she left him. Although he seduces Mandy on his first night home, he still believes she betrayed him twelve years ago. No way would he marry a woman like her. 

As Valentine’s Day looms, someone tries to kill Mandy. Is Adam trying to get rid of her? Or can Mandy trust him to protect her and her son?

Friday, March 10, 2017

Friday's Guest - Krissie Fortune #MFRWauthor #writing

We all know there are six elements of fiction. Who, What, When, Where, Why and How. I believe the first five lead to the sixth which for me is plot. What's your take on this?



1.      How do you create your characters? Do you have a specific method?

 My characters start off in my head, but they’re like chess pieces I move around to make the plot work. Once I have that, I think about the people. What do they like? What do they dislike? Why are they attracted to each other? One of the pins on my Pinterest board of writing tips is a questionnaire about your characters. I find it helps sharpen up my ideas about them. After all that, when I start writing, they take on a life of their own. Maybe I wanted one to be uptight, but she shows me her slutty side. It’s an amalgam of methods that seems to work.

2. Do your characters come before the plot?
 I’m a big believer in plot first. That said, if the characters are wooden, my writing wouldn’t sell.

3. Do you know how the story will end before you begin? In a general way or a specific one?
A general way, with a happy-ever-after guaranteed. I know my hero and heroine will fall in love, and I know some of the obstacles they’ll face along the way. They never have an easy ride.   

4. Do you choose settings you know or do you have books of settings and plans of houses sitting around?
For my Scattered Siblings series, my husband drew me a map based on what I told him about my otherworld. I know which species lives where and the home territory of each werewolf pack. For my Heroes of Westhorpe Ridge Trilogy, I needed a coastal town in North Carolina. I’m a Brit who for health reasons doesn’t do long haul flights. Since my town was imaginary, I used the British sea side resort of Whitby as my base but Americanised it. (And yes, that is where Bram Stoker wrote Dracula, but I left the vampires behind.)
Westhorpe Ridge straddles a gorge with cliffs either side. Devlin’s hotel sits on the cliff top. Montgomery Hall replaces Whitby Abbey on the other.

5. Where do you do your research? On line or from books?
Mostly on line, but anything’s research. I recently went to a talk by a Farrier. I went out of interest, but afterward, l realized I knew my next hero’s profession. My Heroes of Westhorpe Ridge series features former military men. I looked at USA service websites so much a recruiter came on line and wanted to chat with me. They’re also into BDSM and I visited one that opened its doors for writers to chat with the Doms. I learned about flogging, people visiting in their lunch break, and breath control. It was quite a day.

6. Are you a draft writer or do you revise as you go along and why? Do you sketch out your plot or do you let the characters develop the route to the end?
A bit of both. I write until I’m stuck, then revise the chapters I’ve written. By the time I’ve done that, I generally know what happens next. Once my first draft’s finished, I revise and revise until my head hurts. I’m dyslexic and don’t see the errors every time, but with the help of my husband, I get there in the end.

 7. Where can we find you on the net?
Blog            http://kryssiefortune.blogspot.co.uk/
Twitter         https://twitter.com/KryssieFortune
Facebook    https://www.facebook.com/KryssiesFortune
Pinterest      http://bit.ly/1OGFnjc


Thursday, March 9, 2017

Thursday's Second Scene - Toth's Priest #MFRWauthor #paranormal #Alternate ancient Egypt

Namose huddled with his brother behind a line of palm trees hiding them from the road leading to the temple. A loud sound reverberated in the air. Shouts and screams followed.
“What was that?” Namose asked.
I don’t know.” Kashe grasped Namose’s shoulder. “We need to enter the temple, find Tira and Merin and escape.”
Namose listened while Kashe explained his plan. He heard shouting coming from the village and froze. “Father.” He shivered and thought of how he’d been his father’s prisoner until Kashe rescued him.
A camel burst from the temple gates and tore past them. The rider evaded an arrow. The animal ran through the barley field and clattered across the bridge over the irrigation canal.
“That was Merin.” Namose crept closer to the road. He saw men carrying his father’s palanquin.
“Namose, come here at once.”
Years of obedience to that voice goaded Namose to respond. He stepped from the hiding place. Kashe caught his ram. “We can’t obey. Run to the barge.”
Namose shook his head. To disobey meant another flogging. “I must go.”
Kashe followed him. “Namose, stay.”
“Kashe of Mero, you are no longer my son.” The nomarch repeated the words three times.
Namose gasped. He froze. Kashe raised his mace and charged the guards surrounding the nomarch. Drawing deep breaths, Namose ran until he reached his brother. As a team back to back they fought their father’s men. Then the action drew them apart, Namose stumbled. As he straightened he saw the priest’s chariot.
The priest’s grin chilled Namose. Like staring into the eyes of a serpent. He couldn’t move. The evil one grabbed Namose’s arm and dragged him into the chariot. Namose struggled but the grip tightened.
“Kashe, help!"
Namose watched his brother turn and lunge toward the chariot. He missed. A crowd of the guards surrounded him.
“No!” Namose screamed. He tried to jump from the moving vehicle. The priest’s fist smashed into his jaw. Namose fell to the wicker floor.
“Be still. You are mine.”
“Return my heir,” the nomarch shouted.
“He is mine.” The priest laughed. “I am Hebu, beloved of Aken Re.”
The chariot raced through the barley field crushing plants beneath the wheels. The clatter over the bridge hurt Namose’s ears. He huddled on the floor expecting some disaster during the frantic flight to overturn them. His body slammed against the sides of the car. The jostling brought acid into his throat.
Why had this priest taken him? Namose couldn’t think of a reason. He remained a boy in years, just sixteen years, though in four lunars he would gain another year. Then he would be considered a man.
In time the chariot slowed. Before Namose stood, the priest pressed a foot against his back. He bound Namose’s arms behind his back with a length of leather cord.
“Why did you take me?”
“In time you will learn.” Hebu bent closer. “I have a use for you.” Hebu’s laughter showed no trace of humor. “You’ll serve me and in time you will swear allegiance to Aken Re, the true and only god.”
Never. The words reverberated in his head. Though he didn’t voice his denial, thoughts of defiance filled him with purpose. He would never swear to the god of the Hykons. Of the Three of the Two Lands, Toth had his heart. For that reason he had struggled to learn how to read some of the words written in the ancient language he’d discovered in some of the scrolls his father had “borrowed” from the Toth temple guarding the Valley of the Pharaohs,
Hebu waited while the horse drank from an irrigation canal. Namose wished the priest would offer him a drink. Instead the man emptied the water sack and tossed it aside. Hebu took his place and urged the horse forward.
Namose dozed and woke when the chariot stopped a second time. He rolled to his side and peered through the woven side of the cart. The sun was far to the west.
“Who goes there?” a gruff voice asked.
“Hebu, beloved of Aken Re. Is the boat ready to cross the river?”
“Yes.”
Hebu prodded Namose with a booted foot. “Up. If I free your arms will you follow my orders?
Since he had no idea where he was he had no weapons and no choice. He nodded. He wished he was more like his brother. Kashe understood strategy and planning. As the youngest son, Namose hadn’t trained in the ways of a warrior or like the oldest son to rule.
Hebu pulled him from the chariot and freed his arms. Namose sucked in a cry of pain. He refused to let the evil man see him cringe. Needles of pain pricked his hands and arms. He rolled his shoulders to ease the stiffness.
“Pick up the bundle and carry it to the boat,” Hebu said.
Namose obeyed. He limped to the small river craft and stepped on board. He placed the bundle in the tiny shelter near the rear of the deck. Hebu entered the shelter. Namose sank on the deck and leaned against the side.
“Wake me when we near our destination,” Hebu said.
 The old man set the sail. A younger man untied the ropes and leaped over the side. He looked at the old man. “I’ll take over when you’re tired.”
The boatman nodded. He gestured to Namose. “Boy, can you man the sweep?”
“Yes.” Namose moved from his position. “Is there water?”
The old man pointed to a leather flask. “There’s cheese and dates, too.”
Namose drank and carried some of the food to the rear of the boat where he used the long paddle to help guide the direction. Sometime during the night, the aging boatman relieved him. Namose curled on the deck to sleep. As he drifted off he wondered where they headed and if he could escape. Where could he go? He’d never left the compound in Mero.
“Priest, we come to Tebes.”
Namose rubbed his eyes. Could he find a way to leave the priest?
Hebu emerged from the shelter. He handed the bundle to Namose. “Don’t think to escape. I have followers watching for my return.” He waved his hands. Three men saluted.
There was no escape today. Though Namose had sparred with Kashe, Tira and Merin he wasn’t’ fast enough to fight three and expect to win. When the boar touched the dock, he felt chilled. All the men had long knives attached to their belts. He hoisted the bundle and followed Hebu.
Surrounded by the men, he was escorted to where camels waited. Hebu pointed to one carrying supplies. “You’ll ride this one. You can sit like a man or be wrapped in a blanket. Any move toward freedom and that will be your lot.”
Namose cleared his throat. “I’ll ride but I don’t understand why you took me.”
Hebu smiled. “Though your father promised me Kashe would be mine, your brother chose another path. Pian, your oldest brother is dead. Kashe is disowned. You are the heir and more. I also have other reasons to keep you.”
“What?”
Hebu tapped the bundle. “You are a scholar and I need one.”
Namose bowed his head. He wasn’t a scholar. He was only a boy who liked to read. As to being his father’s heir, Hebu was a fool to believe that would come to pass. A man didn’t order his heir flogged.
He sat on the saddle. His hands were bound so he couldn’t escape. The camel he rode was tied to one belonging to the animal ridden by one of the priest’s companions.
Namose’s spirits fell when they avoided the market. They left Tebes using outlying streets. They rode north and east in the same direction where the Hykons had come to invade the Two Lands.
During the heat of the day a huge tent was pitched. Namose crawled inside and feigned sleep. Before long he heard a chorus of snores. He slid under the edge of the tent and started walking. The sand burned through the soles of his sandals. Perspiration poured from his pores. He slogged until exhaustion brought him to his knees.
“You are a fool.”
Namose sprawled on the sand. The grains rubbed his cheek. Hebu looked down from his seat on a camel. The animal lowered its body. Hebu leaped to the ground and flung Namose belly down in front of the saddle and rode back to the tent. There, once again Namose’s arms were bound.
There is no escape,” Hebu said.