EXCERPT
The midday sun of the late summer day
beamed on the caravan consisting of three Rover wagons, several extra coursers
and eight riders. Val tugged off his neck cloth and wiped his sweaty brow.
Today he rode as rear guard and used his affinity for Water to search for
emotions that spoke of strangers. As yet, the group seemed to be the only
travelers for miles.
He scanned the horizon. The grassy plains
stretched to the east and the west of the old rutted road leading toward a
distant grove of trees. The forest could hide attackers, but as yet he sensed
no unknown enemies.
The heavy loads stored in the wagons caused
the slow progress. Val had to admit Doma Jandia was the best trader he had ever
encountered. Not only did they have extra mounts there was enough food and
grain to last a month or more along with the tools they needed to repair the
abandoned keep. He grinned. They still had credit with the Rovers.
An outburst of angry emotions impinged on
his peace. Val’s hands clenched. Four days of travel beneath a hot sun had
brought tempers to the fore, especially from those whose affinity for Fire
guided their actions.
Ky and her courser tore toward him. With
one hand she held the reins. The other hand held a raised sword that blazed
with flames. Behind her, Zand galloped. His sword showed a plume of fire. “Take
that back,” he shouted.
Val rode toward the pair. “Enough,” he
cried. “Dampen those flames. Do you want to set the grass aflame and endanger
us all?”
“She called me a baby,” Zand said.
Val sucked in a breath. “What did you say
to her?”
“That I was better with a sword.”
Val nodded. “Since you have been practicing
with one since you could hold a blade, how else could you be? I say you’re both
acting like children.” In some ways they both were, not only in age but in
experience. “Why don’t the pair of you spar after evening meal when Dragen can
watch and comment?”
The flames on Ky’s sword died. She turned
to Zand. “A good idea.”
“Just blades. No flames,” Zand said.
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ReplyDeleteYikes - sword fighting is bad enough - but add flames!!!!
ReplyDelete"Just blade. No flames." Ha! Love it!
ReplyDeleteI have to agree with Margo, "Just blade, No flames." I love the line.
ReplyDeleteGreat world you've build. Thanks for sharing!
I can't wait to see how that sparring match goes!
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